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@keilah-h

Yes XD

@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

New chapter, please tear into this.

Chapter 4

Dylan stopped abruptly, “Where’s the path?”
“What do you mean ‘where’s the path’?” Olivia shoved past Elina and Jack, gazing out ahead. A seemingly endless sea of trees met her.

“Oh, great, nic…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Hmm, well I guess in the woods around Rosen, I don’t think so. The woods are massive, and nothing really lives there. Besides, a creature stalking about doesn’t help, and something that could take a town could probably pick me off pretty quickly (wish I could say more but that would be spoilers).

As for Terre, which is where my…[Read more]

@rae

If you’ve ever read White Fang, there’s one part in the beginning where this guy knows he’s going to be eaten by wolves, and as he’s attempting to survive despite them, he’s described as appreciating his body a lot more than he ever did before. For instance, he begins studying his hand and the way it’s made, at the intricacies of each print…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Those are great ideas, thank you so much!! This is spurring a lot of ideas now, thanks.

@linus-smallprint

Understandable. Contemporary writing is kind of like writing set in the present or close to it, and are mainly based in reality.

@esther-c

Thank you for the suggestions, I’ll check them out! Okay, compelling characters seem…[Read more]

@keilah-h

(Whether you read that in his voice or however you imagine my voice to sound is up to you.)

I’m now going to read all of your posts in Sniper’s voice now that you mention it

@linus-smallprint

Great, thank you!

@the_lost-journal

Praying for our sister and our cousin’s friend

@esther-c

Liking the story so far, it’s good. I second Trailblazer’s suggestions though, as more description would draw the reader in more.

@esther-c (why didn’t I take you before, you literally write contemporary!!)

First of all, make sure you’re reading contemporary!!! Especially within the little genres that you want to focus on.

Ooh, okay that’s a good idea. I’ll try that, do you have any book suggestions?

I previously read a YA novel that took place in the 80s and am current…

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@trailblazer

Hm, okay I’ll take those into account. I would share details about the stories in mind but they’re both in the very, very early stages of development (aka I have one or two ideas for each and that’s about it 😅).

So far, for the first one I want it to be set in the summer or fall, and be about two high schoolers sending paper airpl…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Great, I’ll read it tomorrow and let you know what I think of it.

@linus-smallprint

Got it, thanks for letting me know.

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Thank you!

@linus-smallprint

Thanks for letting me know.

@keilah-h

Yay, can’t wait!!

@hybridlore

Thank you so much, that means a lot!

@hybridlore

Sorry to hear that, praying for you 💗

You got this, God will help you!!