TheShadow

@ellette-giselle

Book blurbs: tease, don’t summarize with the plot. It should also get the reader really excited and interested, so find a good hook. @linus-smallprint gave some really good advice.

I will not be here to read the new sections until the 23rd since I’m going on a trip, so if you tag me I will likely not respond. The story is goo…[Read more]

@keilah-h

speaking of which, how do you like the fact that I switched out the standard story for a sci-fi version?

It’s really cool, I think it gives a unique twist to the story.

Which of the creature types is your favorite–there are still a few that I’m gonna introduce but they’re just minor characters–and if you lived in that universe, which one…

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@esther-c

Your characters sound really interesting!!

@keilah-h@rae@theducktator @kyronthearcanin @princesachronicle22

Trevor 

Silvanis’ answer was once again long, but provided some interesting information on his family and his relationship with Fairy. He was also, apparently, a hybrid. This keeps getting better and better. Trevor thought, grinning to himself. “All this theorizin’s got us nowhe…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I APOLOGIZE IF MY RANTING MAKES YOU THINK THAT.

It’s fine

you really don’t think it’s a real mess?

No, not really. It’s not perfect, but I still think it’s pretty good.

@esther-c

That sounds good, I’m still deciding on characters

@ellette-giselle

Ooh, Friedrich sounds good. Also congrats on winning!

@keilah-h

that was a terrible joke i’m sorry

Lol it’s fine.

And I’m enjoying it a lot really, I like how you portray the characters. Trust me, it’s really not that bad, and if you’re having fun with it then that’s what matters. If you want I can stop though.

@ellette-giselle

Okay, I finally got around to listening to the playlist, and it was really good!!

@keilah-h

Ohh, ok that makes a lot more sense now.

I may or may not have finished reading it

@ellette-giselle

This is a good question, and there have been a lot of good answers already. I would think Aaron might try to be strong for others, but when he’s alone he would let his emotions come and mourn for his friend privately. Maybe if someone mentions it he could show signs of what he’s truly feeling. Sorry this is late

@freed_and_redeemed

This looks fun, so I would like to

@linus-smallprint

Very good topic right here, I have way more male characters more than female ones and yet emotionally they still act like girls XD

@ellette-giselle

The mood board looks so good!!

@kyronthearcanin @rae @theducktator @keilah-h @princesachronicle22

Weird, I thought I replied to this. Oh well.

Trevor 

“So, Trevor… we’re all in the same boat, then. Great. Any ideas of what’s going on? Someone who hates us all equally, even though we’ve never met?” Naria asked, wrinkling her snout as she spoke. Trevor was about to answer, w…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Also, your drawings of the characters are great!

@ellette-giselle

Okay, almost caught up. I’m so so so sorry that I haven’t been replying! That is totally my fault, I’m so sorry!

I have gotten all the way up until the sections from the last page, and the one you posted today. For feedback, I’m glad Sabina has been converted, and I like where the story is going. Critiques that I have other…[Read more]

@keilah-h

ITS HERE!!!!!!

I started reading part of it, and I love it already!!!

@keilah-h

Ohhh okay XD

@thearcaneaxiom

You tagged me, but this never came up in my email, so sorry for the late response😕

That’s okay, thanks for answering anyway!

There can also be the kind of rival where one is trying to pull the other towards their way of thinking. What comes to my mind is the villain troupe where they tell the hero “where not so different you and I…

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