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@stephie

Oh, nooo!! That’s tragic.

@stephie

Thats great!!

@whalekeeper

Praying for you

@hybridlore

Okay, thanks. The content isn’t too violent (not yet at least), the most aggressive thing a character has done is slap someone in the face, but that’s it lol.

@theducktator

Lol, no incense for us either. We too got our throats blessed though.

@the_lost-journal

Ooh, this is cool. Are you still working on your other WIP?

@esther-c

Praying

@stephie

So sorry to hear that, praying for you

@ellette-giselle

Okay, thank you. My dad (who is also a writer) has very similar advice, and says that no matter how bad the writing may be, it’s best to get your thoughts and ideas down and then edit.

@whalekeeper

Each scene has one important decision. This is a complete set up for an inciting incident, caused by Joe’s fatal flaw. He is flo…

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@hybridlor

These next chapters were great!! The conflict so far is amazing and I really like how your going at a steady pace by building up Sara’a conflict, your doing it really well!!

@hybridlore

Yay!!! I will check them out later today.

@hybridlore

Your welcome, looking forward to the next chapter!

 Ellette mentioned she would prefer for it to share less about the overall plot. I wondered if other people agreed with that too.

I thought it was fine, although I think if you did remove parts about the main plot more than it would be more intriguing.

@hybridlore

Your welcome, and yeah, sometimes they do lol

@jonas

We shall see… thank you for the votes, btw.

@rae

Aw, thank you!! Glad you liked it!!

(And I have to agree, not a big fan of the girls)

@hybridlore

Yikes, that would be a chaotic kitchen 😅

Lol, seems like a baker’s nightmare. Also, your votes have successfully been changed 👍

Can’t blame you for disliking those characters, they need a lot of work lol

@hybridlore

Just caught up with this, and it’s great!! Seriously, everything was really good, I love your style and I’m already so invested in this story, can’t wait to read more!!

@hybridlore

This sounds great, I’lol look at it tomorrow.

@hybridlore @keilah-h @rae @loopylin  @arcticanimals @Esther-c @jonas @theducktator

This should be everyone reading the story (if not, I apologize in advance), so here’s the next chapter!! Hope you all enjoy, please vote by February 1st!

Chapter 2

A delicious intent

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@liberty

I will be participating.

@ellette-giselle

Wait, are you emailing us the link or will you post it here when it’s almost time for the call?

@the_lost-journal

Lol.

I don’t really know the verse well, so I’m going to go along with your answer.

@linus-smallprint

For example, our church heavily teaches the Post-Millennium end-time view. In fact, we had a sermon to do with that just last Sunday. I try to lean more towards the Pan-Millennium view (everything will all pan out in the end)

What are the post millennium and pan millennium views? They sound interesting.