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TheShadow started the topic Please tear this apart in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 4 weeks ago
Hello, here is the first chapter of my WIP, and please, feel free to rip this thing apart. Critique it as much as you want, if there’s something that seems off, illogical, or is bothering you, don’t be afraid to tell me. I want this story to be the best it can, and the only way to get there is through trial and error. If I tag you, please don’t…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Ooh, this looks very intriguing. And perfect timing too since I started writing my book… my apologies for the future pain you will have to suffer
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TheShadow replied to the topic Mini Adventure Ideas? in the forum Plotting 5 months ago
Lol really? Can’t wait for that XD
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Thanks!
@freed_and_redeemed@whalekeeper @esther-c @keilah-h @grcr
Percival
A crash sounded, and Percival bolted awake. He leapt to his feet and reached for his sword, scanning the room. It appeared he was in a castle, judging by the stone walls, and red carpet beneath him. Castle! Lord Damien’s castle! “Come out and face me like…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Wait Sniper plays saxophone? HOW DID I NEVER KNOW THIS?!
@rae@princesachronicle22 @theducktator@kyronthearcanin
Azalea
Why does everyone seem so upset? Well, besides Stephen, Joy, Callum and Evelyn. They had only just come back from their search, and had found the others at the largest cabin, looking very uncomfortable. Fairy was…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
THAT’S A GREAT IDEA!!!! Yes, we should totally do that!!!!!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Discernment in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 months ago
I think your right about the anxiety being dangerous, and thank you! I will tag you when I post the first chapter soon.
I will, thank you!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
That sounds good.
@theducktator @rae @kyronthearcanin@princesachronicle22
Eldred
Eldred, Rosalind, and the group moved toward the largest buildings in the center. The wall closest to them had a window, and they crowded around it, peering in to see a table, some chairs, boxes… and some writing. Eldred read it over, then read it a…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
@theducktator @freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper @esther-c @keilah-h @grcr
Sorry, school has started and I was whisked away by it. Anyway, I will be introducing three characters.
Percival
Age: 19
Species: human, and from the fictional country of Terre, which is inspired by Germany and France.
Appearance: tall, muscular though more athletic than…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Discernment in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 months ago
Thanks for the steps, I will use them while discerning, especially number 2. My book idea is one that is set in the middle ages, and originally it was to be set during the Black Death. Over time, however, I think this might be the thing I was stressing over. I was convicted over how dark that time period was, and how I might not…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Discernment in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 months ago
I will try this out, thank you!
Those are good questions, I will think about these things, thanks.
Aww, thank you! I really appreciate that, and thanks for the encouragement.
Thank you all for your advice, I really appreciate it!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Mini Adventure Ideas? in the forum Plotting 5 months ago
Your first chapter is amazing, it’s really funny and entertaining.
Ok, some ideas. Maybe Linda could go to Paris, or some place in the world. She could go to the zoo and try to free a peacock or a type of bird there. Those are a few off the top of my head, I’ll try to think of some more tomorrow.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Question Regarding Fantasy Books in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 months, 1 week ago
Sorry this is late, this is answering the first question. I agree with everyone else, it isn’t the books fault. Yes, a book can influence how someone thinks but it’s what the person decides to do with that information and carrying it out, which is the person’s doing. If the main focus of the book is magic, then I would say that…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Discernment in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 months, 1 week ago
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TheShadow started the topic Discernment in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 months, 1 week ago
Hello guys, I have a question. How do you discern if an idea for something is from God? I have an idea for a book though I’m not sure if it’s from God, myself, or the devil, and have been too scared to do something with it for fear of not doing God’s will/doing something the devil wants. This fear has also leaked into other book ideas and I have…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
I should write some little snippets of them discovering modern things, that’d be hilarious
That would be great XD
@theducktator @rae @kyronthearcanin@princesachronicle22
I will try to get a RP out later today.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 5 months, 1 week ago
I have returned, and THATS SO GOOD!!!!! The pose is awesome!!
Not a marvel fan, but that’s amazing!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 2 weeks ago
Lol thanks, yours is pretty good too though. And it sounds a lot more fun XD
Sniper and Huntress wouldn’t even know what a podcast is lol…..their home universe is in an alternate 1970’s right now, as opposed to yours in the 2000’s somewhere…..
Haha I’m imagining that rn lol. Yeah, Trevor’s stories take place around the current time…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 2 weeks ago
also yeah I love all of them, but I think I’d be either a full Ailurid or a hybrid, either Argonite/Ailurid or Drachenheul/Ailurid. what would be your other half? Ornithiform/what else?
Ooh, that would be cool. The other half would probably be an argonite as well.
I suppose we’ll talk when you get back! I’ll probably have added quite…
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 2 weeks ago
He was thinking that the whole thing is some setup where as they were all there to collaborate to make a true crime podcast together and reflect on their experiences. Something random like that.
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