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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Emeline
“Amon sirs, miss.” Emeline glanced from the shadows into the doorway, where three men and one woman in a mask stood, all dressed strangely. “Sorry, about the green glow. I can’t get rid of it without dropping these two. Uh…you looking for the one who brought us here too?” One of the men said, looking more like a boy…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lol probably
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I think I was the last post, so I’ll let someone else go (although if no one else wants to, I can write a quick RP)
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TheShadow replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
He was a bad person, but it was due to how he was treated (which is not justifiable for being bad in any way, just that is a reason as to why). And there was some goodness in him, he did release Christine, Raoul and the Persian when he was shown real love and kindness.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
He’s the Phantom, it’s his real name
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TheShadow replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Okay, cause that looks like the 2004 one (wouldn’t recommend it tbh) but the poster is great
BEST PHANTOM OF THE OPERA CHARACTER!!!!!
Dang… that’s so good!!! I love the pose!!!
I like Eric more personally, just because I found him more interesting but Raoul was good too.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I was
stalkingscrolling through these art pages and… EEEH!!!! PHANTOM!!!!!! ITS SO GOOD!!!Is it based off the 2004 adaptation? Because the Phantom design looks like it.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
lol I think you copied my text twice
Whoops, your right XD
And your drawings are great!! They’re all really good, although I think I like the third best because the scene it’s from is hilarious lol
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TheShadow replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
In fact, I don’t know when I’ll be finished with the story because I still have to wait for the very last comic installment to be released, then I can read it over and decide whether the ending they have is fitting for my own story, then transcribe it (and rewrite it in a sci-fi format haha)
Nice XD
I’ve also started drawing illus…
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TheShadow replied to the topic Please tear this apart in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Weird, the same thing is happening to me too.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Almost two weeks since the last RP. I’m still up for doing this, my characters need some serious development together lol
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TheShadow replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Nice, it looks really good!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Im at the point where the team was disbanded and they’re getting back together. The court room scene was also fun.
Some of it’s derived from official media the developers of the actual game have put out over the years. The plot of the latter two-thirds or so are from a comic series they made
I think that’s cool that you were able to ta…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Ooh, cool aesthetic!! The colors work really well together!!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Please tear this apart in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Thank you, and thanks for helping with the historical accuracy (I will definitely need help with that lol)
Okay, agreed, the beginning is not great imo, I will definitely change it, and the formatting. Thanks!
Okay, that way looks a lot better, and I see what you mean, it is kind of confusing. Thank you!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@keilah-h
1. saw the Sniper video, it’s great XD2. I’ve read more of the fanfic, and it’s still good, very entertaining (the loaf scene was amazing lol)
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TheShadow replied to the topic Please tear this apart in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Great catch! Thanks!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Sure!
Thank you!!
Rowen
The lack of people was rather unsettling in the corridor, the dim light of the torches not helping to boost the mood. Odd. Rowen thought as he followed Emeline. This is all very… odd. “Is there anyone here?!” Emeline exclaimed, opening a door to a room and peeking in. There was no point in being s…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Please tear this apart in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Chapter one
Blossom Town’s suffering had only grown worse. The farmers brought less and less produce and food to the market each week. Daily, wagons rumbled through the streets, carrying the bodies of the victims of starvation. The familiar sound of wheel against stone brought villagers from their cottages or work to watch in somber silence as t…[Read more] -
TheShadow started the topic Please tear this apart in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Hello, here is the first chapter of my WIP, and please, feel free to rip this thing apart. Critique it as much as you want, if there’s something that seems off, illogical, or is bothering you, don’t be afraid to tell me. I want this story to be the best it can, and the only way to get there is through trial and error. If I tag you, please don’t…[Read more]
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