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Keilah H. replied to the topic idk what to call this but… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 I love this!
Chapter 30 is interesting to me because my family went through sometime similar. Here’s the part that stood out:
She pictures her mom the last time she saw her, and remembers how she barely recognized her. She didn’t want that mom back. Why would she grieve a version of her mother that was broken, shattered, t…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 I’m late, but I read that scene almost as soon as I saw the email. It was absolutely beautiful!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months ago
@whalekeeper all righty then, expect an rp tomorrow (hopefully)
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months ago
the coat sounds cool! My favorite coat is a vintage blazer I got thrifting
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months ago
@whalekeeper @rae for some reason I’m not getting notifs for this forum even though I’m supposed to, unless you guys tag me. (part of the reason I haven’t done a rp in a while, the other reason being just plain old busy-ness)
your charries are still sitting around waiting for the rain to let up right?
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months ago
Dante
He gave a sort of half shrug. “Yeah. Only place I haven’t been kicked out of yet.”
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Loopy replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months ago
Lois
“I’d like that,” he said, with a slight smile in his eyes. He could use some friends, and he liked Moth, even if he was a bit strange.
Lois looked down at his plate after filling it, and suddenly realized he wasn’t hungry. The food stayed untouched. He glanced back at his friend.
“If you don’t mind me asking, what is that pa…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months ago
DanteDante was silent for a moment. Now that he thought about it, he really was running low on safe places he could stay.
“I guess… I could hide in a corner of that basement for a few more days. Try to sleep this off.”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months ago
@whalekeeper ah ok!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 4 months ago
A NEW PERSON? AAAAA
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months ago
@whalekeeper Awwwww so cute he looks like a gummy candy 💕 Have you gotten to hold it?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months ago
@theducktator Not celebrating Christmas until the 24th but celebrating all 12 days of Christmas afterward seems like a good tradeoff tbh.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Glorifying Sin?? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 months ago
I think it sounds fine. You mention it being ‘not that bad of a sin’ but I don’t think it would be a bad thing to write even if it were worse, it’s a path many people go down and it’s good to show that people can turn around and find a new life even if they get deep in to something or enjoy it. Some thing I would note is that is…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Glorifying Sin?? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 months, 1 week ago
Could you maybe say what specifically she’s doing? I might be able to help more with specifics, but if you want to avoid spoilers, that’s alright.
Every sin has an effect on the person sinning and the people around them, whether visible or not. So even if she’s enjoying herself, you can show how it’s eating away at other parts of her…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The mailbox! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
@theducktator I plan on replying eventually. Sorry for taking so long
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Loopy replied to the topic The mailbox! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
To: Flax, 21st Palace avenue Guest unit #5
From: Brea Thorne, Thorne Mansion, N. Elm Street, Linmaus
Dear Flax,
I am busy with many things such as school and piano lessons and taking care of Mother. It is a lot, and I don’t want to fall behind in my studies. I suppose writing to you won’t be such a waste of time,…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
LoisThe clock turned to five, and some of the students cheered as a tall man stepped up to the podium at the front of the room. He smiled pleasantly and held up a hand to silence them.
“Please, everyone, take a seat. I know you all are very hungry and tired from your travels here, so I will try to make this quick. I am H…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
@theducktator @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon
Lois
Lois turned away from his short interaction with Viktor, to see a teammate go down with a ball to the face. He looked to where the ball came from, and saw Felicity, standing near the front of her team. She winked at him, then threw two more balls in quick succession, one at him and one at Viktor.…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
“I think the hardest thing about jumping off a bridge would be deciding whether to do a front flip or a back flip.” -my friend’s brother
“Are trees categorically considered plants?”-a coworker
“I’m jealous of my shoes.” -My cousin
“Autism is a spectrum, selfishness is just a thing.” -My dad
My cousin, texting me: “You simpil tun”
Me:…[Read more]
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