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Koshka replied to the topic Hello world! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 2 months ago
Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! I’m Koshka, and I write historical-nonmagical-fantasy. And poetry, flash fiction, ect.
Interesting! I don’t read dystopian myself as I haven’t been able to find one that didn’t make me ill.
Now for questions:
Do you like hot tea? If so do you prefer it with cream?
What are your favorite…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
That sounds good to me!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
By the way, the Vulk brothers speak with a rough Russian accent.
The brothers
“Let’s review what we know.”
Vulkasin’s groan was cut short by a look. His brother was in high order all right. More plans.
“Ze Lord of zis place ran into Lyn, and isn’t too happy about it. Ve need to be careful…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Thanks! I love it too!
I think they need to meet each other, then learn who Ocran is, than we can have the ‘battle’. XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
I love how you’re writing his this way. It makes me feel right at home.
Mikkel
Face-palmed?
Mikkel slowly brought his hand to his forehead.
Face-to-palm.
“Yes. I’ve never seen an officer hit himself.” The rifle strap twisted back and forth in his hand. “I’m sorry ma’am.” He staightened his helmet. “But sir, you grew up on a farm?”
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Zlatan
“Good. Ve need to move.”
He turned, searching for the group.
Here was Vulkasin, gazing longingly at the stone wall. There’s Arabella, looking to the stars.
And Novembré standing stock still, wide eyed and open faced.
The brothers shared a look.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Mikkel
Ezra smacked himself full in the face. Strange. This officer hit himself, not his soldiers.
“You’re right. And, forgive me if I’m intruding, but, how do you know castles so well?”
Oh, that.
“I spent much of my childhood at my Uncle’s estate and the Squirey.”
Eyebrows rose.
“It’s a court boarding school”
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Mikkel
A bed chamber?
“Sir…” Mikkel pulled off his helmet. The chin strap needed straightened. “If this were my castle, I wouldn’t be too pleased to find strangers inside the walls, much less the bed chambers.” he ran his fingers through his hair. “But we should be nearing the servants quarters by now, seeing the lack of…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Any Other Fanfiction Writers Out There? 😀 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 Really? So sorry, next time I get a chance I’ll try to redo it.
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Koshka replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Aww…now I really may cry.
I love broken characters! They grip me deep, like no healthy one can.
To be completely honest I sort of liked him more than Riker at first. Now they’re pretty even.
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Koshka replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
YOU KILLED LEON!?! *Bursts into tears*
How could you?*sniff*
I liked him…*gasp*
And you just BUMPED HIM OFF! *Sob*
Good scene. Thank you for ending it on a higher note.
*Sniff*
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
I know practically nothing about star wars, so as far as I’m concerned he could be your own creation. =)
You’re fine! I’m actually working today, so I haven’t had time to catch up till now.
(Poor boys.)
Mikkel
Cold relief poured down Mikkel’s neck.
“No, sir. I haven’t been the most, er… Thank you for mentioning…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
All right, time to introduce the character I was talking about. Here’s a drawing of him (that I did not make):

For the things I DIDN’T make about him:
His name’s Crosshair, for his prowess with a rifle (he can hit a target from 10 kilometers/6 miles away; in other words, he could shoot something off the top of Mount…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Any Other Fanfiction Writers Out There? 😀 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
file:///C:/Users/JAHEL/Documents/My%20stories/What%20If–Star%20Wars-Tron%20combination%20(pdf%20file).pdf
Ok, I hope this’ll work. Here’s the whole thing!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Poor Ezra!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Mikkel
This is your fault. Go after him.
But I didn’t mean…
“Stay here, I’ll be back.”
His feet were already moving.
Two strides. Three. He was running.
“1st Lieutenant Ezra sir!”
The soldier stopped. Perhaps titles are useful.
Mikkel stumbled to a stop, not exactly the most graceful of its kind.
“Yes?”
“Sir, three…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Mikkel
The song had been beautiful. It had been a refuge.
“Sorry…to all of you…for being such a jerk. I just…we have no idea where we are and I’m just…being reminded of my best friend Yoshua that…that died in a plane crash I caused.”
Mikkel’s head jerked up, a thousand shattered pictures flashing by.
Os…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@koshka He’s extremely futuristic. He comes from the Star Wars universe, so… I don’t think it’ll be too much of a problem though.
@freedomwriter76 ok then, I’ll introduce him tomorrow if I can!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Yeah…that probably wouldn’t work. XD
Mikkel
It was a beautiful song, the type where each of the words could be felt.
Deep.
Where life still mattered.
Mikkel joined in, swinging one hand in meter.
So long. So very long ago.
He felt like a school boy.
Another voice, sweeter in tone. Mikkel looked up. The others had…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
I don’t think that’s a problem, just as long as you write with them. I’m fine with someone else joining, as long as @freedomwriter76 is.
What time period is he?
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