TheLobsterLover

@godlyfantasy12 Sure. I’m going to get off soon, so if you reply I most likely won’t be able to answer.

@freedomwriter76 @koshka

Feather and Crosshair

Feather’s eyes stayed to a familiar-looking door. Hadn’t she been through it before? With Rinzler…..last time…..

“Crosshair, over there.” She tapped his shoulder. “In that room…there…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Alright, you want me to do that now?

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 Do you mind if Feather and Crosshair leave the group temporarily? I’m planning to have them come back later, but I kinda wanted to see how they’d take being stuck here alone, and how they’d deal with one of the villains when it’s just the two of them. You guys can choose what to do about that.

@lightoverdarkness6 Kad is actually mine, but since I don’t use him too much I can see where the mistake comes from….

@freedomwriter76 Sorry for not replying, I was on a road trip. I don’t mind your idea! Since Ezra was the first one Hunter and Omega met, it makes sense that they’d hang out with him, and of course they can meet Eva and Abelard! Maybe that’ll provide the chance for me to showcase one or two of the other three or four brothers in the family.

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Squishy!!!!!!!

Eira

To my utter relief the prayer was short, but still the words rankled my mind. She called Him the God who sees. As if this God so many people believed in cared a jot about us. As if he even listened.

Maybe He is real, I don’t know, but if he is, he obviously doesn’t think…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

YES. The worst thing we could do would be to forget. I agree that it does need written about, and I am certainly still waiting for more. Just…*sigh*

Mwahaha… character conflict.

Ooo! I can’t wait!

@freedomwriter76

…and now we enter the reason I don’t typically study WWII.

*gasp*

I’m an eccentric mentor!?

*Starts to throw confetti*

Waaiiittttt….

*Lowers confetti*

What exactly does that mean?

@godlyfantasy12

And you do a lovely job of it too! XD

@freedomwriter76

Ugh! I. Despise. Hans.

That was so good! I love all the history stuff, even though, to be honest, I usually don’t research WWII often. I do love this though, and….ahhhh….

This is totally making me want to dig Promise of Zion out again. XD

@godlyfantasy12

AHHHHHH!!!! Just don’t look to closely, alright?

Hmm, I guess you could dictate out loud.

@freedomwriter76

Yeah but – *shhhh!* Don’t tell her the rest!

@godlyfantasy12

She has auburn/red hair (a little more red than auburn though), and leaf green with amber and blue flecks.

Do I obsess over my character’s eyes? Maybe a little. XD

@godlyfantasy12

Hehehe….*whispers*

“She’s figured us out!”

Yes, we definitely know each other in real life.

@godlyfantasy12

XD XD XD

Aplets and Cotlets! Little candies similar to Turkish Delights, but made from apples, pears, or apricots, and assorted tree nuts. Or no nuts, it depends on the variety.

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

*Waves*Hi!! Want some?

*Holds out a box of Aplets and Cotlets*

@felicity

I am wondering though, Ludwika and Michał, are they just being obnoxious brother and sister, or is there conflict in this family? Because it may just be me, but they felt rather strained.

And what draft is this?

@felicity

Wow. I like your set up. You did a very good job of an intro.

I did feel like some things were a little too stated, and perhaps not quite smooth. You did a very good job though. I enjoyed it, and will be hoping for more!

And I should probably read more contemporary fiction. It was a little bit funny on my side to be reading about cell…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Eira

The sidewalk was hard and my feet yearned for the soft dirt around the orphanage. Still, I kept up a vigorous pace. I’d be late if I didn’t hustle. My backpack kept shifting with each step, numbly jarring my back, but I had a rythum, and it worked. In a few more seconds I was within sight…[Read more]