TheLobsterLover

@kyronthearcanin You’re welcome!

oh and that article is awesome. Makes me wonder if I’ve gone too far in some recently picked up obsessions, but TBH that’s how I always feel when I read articles about pacing yourself and having a filter on your media, so don’t feel at fault for messing me up. If anything, I probably needed it, and am now…[Read more]

@rae what’s wrong with cryptid stories? Not that I’m defending them. I don’t even know what they are besides stories of someone looking for a mysterious animal.

Maybe don’t look them up if you find so much dark stuff, and write the story a different way, looking at something else for inspiration. “Adventurer/journalist discovers a scary,…[Read more]

@rae I see it! Oh, this’ll be funny.

@rae lol what’s his channel called? I’ll look it up.

@rae

Jaylen and Hunter

The dragons watched as Mayfly splashed through her creations. She made a few animal shapes, but they deformed into blobs as she tried to make them move. So she made them into other things. Hunter thought he saw a dragon or two in there.

Silvanis pulled off his mask and growled, the pupils of his eyes slitted.

“What’s she…[Read more]

@rae lol I gotta tell some of those to my brother

@freed_and_redeemed

Ok, but if Hans, the Hemlock/Rampart equivalent of your story universe (I’m pretty sure you don’t remember them, but suffice it to say, they’re my villains, and they’re horrible), hates Frida, then she must be really evil.

Like really evil.

She’d probably take a fairly high spot on my “Most Hated Characters Because They’re…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin That’s so cool!! I can’t click the link though.

@freed_and_redeemed

Hmm, that is a bit of a pickle.

Perhaps he was originally just afraid of (and a little bit for) Adinah. He didn’t hate them at first (that’s not something that happens overnight). He kept the boyd because, at the root, he did at first still love Adinah (and them) and vaguely wanted to keep them safe.

Also, he doesn’t have to…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed IDK who’s gonna die but I know for sure it’s gonna be tragic.

@theducktator That’s cool!! I like the other gem names too.

I’m liking it! I’m very much liking it!

(also I know this is a WW2 historical fiction story but I can’t help but imagine them as having technological advancements for some reason. Maybe it’s because the way this story is going, it kinda reminds me of what  my brother and I come up with.)

@freed_and_redeemed My reaction to Moishe talking about them shooting his wife was the same as Matthias’s lol. “like they WHAT NOW?!”

So they’re spies or something? That’s kinda cool. I also love all their names, they’re pretty unique.

And hey! We get to see Leo/Reuben and Riker! A little weird seeing them from the outside perspective of…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

*Strangled noises*

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Please don’t kill Moishe. It may be a pretty amazing wrapup if Mathias is killed (not that you are planning to do that, I’m just a fellow writer{rather concerned btw over those choices[does he go to a camp?(If he does, is it the one Riker is stationed at?)]}), but please…that would just be…[Read more]

@rae oooh very cool!

@esther-c Honestly, the very fact that you can come up with an idea and have it as a short story is great, when I have ideas they always either turn into a whole saga or become a scene in a larger work.

The idea itself is interesting! I’d say write it!

@freed_and_redeemed This all sounds so cool!! I love all your new characters, I can’t choose my favorite.

@freed_and_redeemed lol how you said Riker and Leon “aren’t cooperating”

happens all the time with my characters.

oh and your new charries sound amazing

@theducktator ooh interesting!

I like how the female duck is called Serpentine, a long, majestic, complicated name (how’d she get it anyway?) and then the male duck is just Bob. Brilliant.

Ending’s a bit choppy, but that’s nothing editing can’t fix.

@theducktator you’re welcome!!

@theducktator

That death made me madder than possibly any other death/supposed death in the books. It was sweet though, that each of the kids got to feel their father’s love in their own special way.

Peet though. Peet hurt.