TheLobsterLover

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Nice! I think Falon or Sara are my favorite book characters that you’ve created (so far).

Hey, jaded teen girls are always the most fun to write. Some people might disagree with me, but I love female characters who are outwardly strong but actually hide a lot of insecurities inside. They leave so much room for plot twists and lots of…[Read more]

@smiley

I mean, Maria from Identity kind of had a depressing backstory, though she’s not as much of a depressing character. Also, in my other side WIP (that is currently on hold), my MC Kali and the future love interest Judah both kind of have depressing backstories. (But it is dystopian lol… so doesn’t everyone have a depressing backstory?)…[Read more]

@smiley I know! It’s been over ten minutes already! 😆

True lol. YES FALON! I love her too (although I haven’t gotten very far in your fanfic yet). Characters with depressing backstories are always the best lol.

Oh, and it’s your turn to RP in the character castle if you want.

@freedomwriter76 Oh wow!!

I’m glad Felix is redeemed, even if Hans isn’t.

And yes! Make a family tree! Preferably with pictures of each of the charries.

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Hunter

“Uhm…I like to paint more than anything, but…uhm…I normally have to draw something before I paint it. I draw and paint trees a lot though…I like painting.” Reuben said.

Hunter noticed a few apparently-permanent flecks of paint along the boy’s hands. He must really be into it.

They reached the door. Reube…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 WOW……

That was kinda sweet….

I love brother interactions! (Even though I’ve said that before.)

@freedomwriter76 Wait a sec, Hans and Felix are brothers? How did I miss that detail?

Aren’t they your villains?

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Crosshair

He hit the ground, hard.

Ow….

Two figures peeked out of the shadows, startled by his sudden arrival.

Wait….He knew them.

“Hello, Paxton.” he said. “And you….Riker, right?”

@acancello Ooh, I’ll do it!

1. What’s your favorite color? Blue and orange.
2. Favorite animal? Somewhere between dolphins and lizards.
3. Favorite book (Sorry, that’s a hard question 😀 ) It changes all the time….
4. Anything you would like to share like stories, WIPs? Well…..My stories are mostly fanfics. And over half of those aren’t even…

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@felicity LOL!

Why don’t we give every character some brownies?? I know a couple more who’d love that.

@freedomwriter76

Hunter

A boy nearly ran into him. He nearly jumped, but held his composure.

“Uhm…hi. Sorry for running into you…I just really need to get to my Algebra I class…heh…” The other kid looked embarrassed.

“It’s all right.” Hunter told him. “I was going that way too…sorta…. Wanna come with me?”

“Sure.” The other boy nodded.

Th…[Read more]

@whalekeeper I’m game!

We never pointed out what Star wanted to tease everyone about, lol.

And male leads? Didn’t most old dystopias have a male lead?

IDK if female dystopia protagonists is a thing?

The way you’re putting it, all of the problems with dystopias nowadays is they’re all trying to be Hunger Games knockoffs. And I know that had a girl lead.

@esther-c I could care less what a country is based off if it’s fictional.

And I have wayyy too many love triangles and such myself. I don’t see a problem as long as it’s written well.

@loopylin I’m good with that.

Allen can defend himself, quite well I might add. He can handle minor injuries, like nothing that’ll take a really long time to heal. Cuts and scratches/non-lethal blaster shots are fine.

Oh, and Feather will probably mostly be trying to find a safe way down…..so she’ll just be wandering nearby for a while. If a group passes by, she might ask them for help or something, but I don’t think I’ll RP as much for her right now.

@freedomwriter76 @theloonyone

Crosshair

How did he know?

How did he know???

Every word Hitchens mentioned….

Drowning. Burning. Being stabbed…….

Every way Crosshair been hurt before……

The third “How do you know?” was snarled out loud.

“I have my ways.” For a second, Hitchens’ smirking face turned to Hemlock’s. [I will explain who…[Read more]

(you can add what he says next)