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And what is eurochlydon? Why did they need to sacrifice someone to it? (I get why him specifically, because they hate him, but why anyone?)

@godlyfantasy12 Wow I love that! How does she survive?

I think you might’ve told me, but I probably forgot–it was a while ago. You can answer in your series forum if you don’t want to take up space here.

@godlyfantasy12 Aww, I love how Pax has nicknames for all his friends.

how, again, did he come to think of Ara as his sister?

@starshiness Nice! I’m liking it so far!

@esther-c Ok! I’m going to do mine now.

Tech

Computers……

Lots of them.

His talons itched to race across the keyboards.

No one else was there. Was he even allowed to do anything yet?

Tech ran his hand over one of the computers, the plastic and metal somehow calming.

He was named after it, so maybe that accounted for something.

He was…[Read more]

That’s at least what I do. I don’t know about your writing style.

@godlyfantasy12 I’ve been like that before! I still get like that sometimes, actually. And this is with fanfics!

I did what some of the others are advocating. I wrote one of the others first.

I’ve noticed we writers rarely start the story at the beginning……We find a scene in the middle and work from there. So you might want to do that if…[Read more]

@zemira Where are your characters at? I’m planning to bring my currently-wandering charrie into the group with my other one, and I’m wondering if you want them to meet up with her first, since they’re all going in the same direction.

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

Crosshair

“You have no idea who we are, do you?” one man snarled.

“Now, now…w…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 Oh noooooo! What are they going to do to them???

Oh, and my brother’s name is Ethan btw!!

@godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper

Hunter

The other boy pushed them back with a screech, slashing paint over his art. Paxton whimpered.

So did Hunter, the sound escaping his lips before he really knew why.

He didn’t mean to make him mad! What had he done?

Paxton handed the other kid a piece of candy. How nice of him…….

The boy accepted it,…[Read more]

@joy-calle Hi again!

I think adding another POV is a great idea. It’ll let you show so much more. And you can detail more onto a character if you’re “listening in” on his thoughts.

@freedomwriter76 Those little scenes! are they part of your actual book or just examples?

I have a feeling I’ll love the book about them once you get around to…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 Good. At least he’s happy now…….

Poor Riker though, having lost what I assume is one of his only friends.

@gwyndalf-the-wise Hello again!!

Writing’s been going well! I found out that fan fictions for video games are a thing, so I’m going to try my hand there……we’ll see how it goes……

Oh, and yeah……If I 20 unread emails, I panic, lol. Unless I have them unread for a reason, like I’m going to save them for later.

@smiley Wow, that’s cool! (Y’know, all of the romance in my stories comes from other people’s stories. I have no experience with it myself and don’t really want any, but I love ships in stories for some reason…..)

@freedomwriter76 NOOOOOO FIN

At least he’s in heaven with Jesus now………

(He was a Christian, right? Please tell me he was.)

(They’re probably going to think Cross is Pax’s brother or dad or something, lol. He won’t care.)

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @zemira

Crosshair

“That child again. There’s no reason for him to shriek. Someone needs to teach him something.” the woman muttered.

Actually, she did seem like the type to make kids scream…..

Jareth wasn’t the shrieking type. If he was in a fearless mood, he would’ve come up to her and told her she was a sca…[Read more]

@whalekeeper Sure! My mom shortens it to K all the time.

I’ll go ahead and RP for him then…..

Hunter

The other boy–the one beside Paxton–was drawing something.

The outline of a creature…..One he didn’t know.

“What’s that?” he asked, looking over. Pax continued to inspect his little gift.

@whalekeeper Marcel’s pretty cool! What or who is he drawing?

(Hunter’s probably going to be really curious in a couple seconds)

@mineralizedwritings Ok! I’ll wait till lunch, but I’ll be sure to have one of my charries meet him then!