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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@evelyn-collins weird. Sometimes pictures glitch though. This must be one of those days…..
Hey, if you can tell me exactly what you’re stuck on, I might be able to help, although I’ll have to get back to you on it in a day or two because I have to get off in a sec.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 2 years, 6 months ago
I’m just gonna have to pick between them.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 2 years, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper sounds fun!
now, what to do……
I don’t have a lot of my writing down on paper lol. It’s mostly in my head still, so I’m just going to have to type random scenes up here once I narrow down who I want to insert.
Crosshair and Snake seem like the most likely candidates. They’d survive for fairly long, depending on who they’re…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@evelyn-collins nope, still glitched, try another way of putting it into the window
hit the insert/edit image and then get it from your computer or phone’s files?
you’re welcome for the idea! I love having a fellow Star Wars fanfic writer to talk to lol. I can’t wait to see it if you end up writing it!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@evelyn-collins ooh, one thing you could do is write a short prequel from Crosshair’s POV, starting off much the same way that episode starts off, but instead of Rampart sending him off with Cody, he’s like “You’re coming with me to investigate this planet.”
It could also give a little detail as to why Cross is tracking Leo, but makes no effort…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Umm…the drawing’s severely glitched. I can only see loads of text lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@rae wow…..
getting a little worked up there
However, I don’t blame you for not wanting to add him in if he’s that overpowered. My question is, how exactly do the characters in your story get close enough to beat him, if like you said there’s only one being (besides God) who can do it? Like I can see Alpha going there by himself to fight, but…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
oh, and thanks! I have a lot of really cool dragon ideas.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@evelyn-collins ah ok makes sense
so what canon events did happen? Like obviously Crosshair joined the Empire, the rest of the Batch are probably doing mercenary missions right now, etc….
So would you say this story happens in roughly season 1’s, 2’s, or 3’s place on the actual timeline? I’d go for 2 maybe if we absolutely had to quantify it,…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Would y’all like to start this RP up again or modify it ect.? I can’t be super steady on here, but I can at least rp 1-3 times a week.
If y’all do want to continue it, I’d like to insert a character perhaps.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@mineralizedwritings wow…..
Nice snippet!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
OUR brave sharpshooter boy lol.
Since you’re writing so much about him, he’s yours also.
ok off topic, but when you finish that picture of Markus, can you show me? He sounds like a really cool character, and I love his name!
As a dragon-person like the ones in my fanfics, he’d be awesome. Phee is a color changing, venom-spitter dragon…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed Hans whyyyyyyy
so actually, thanks to Hans’ complicated backstory, and a few story clues from his canon universe, I’ve begun rethinking my fanfic villain, Hemlock.
He’s totally evil, through and through, and under practically no circumstances will I ever feel sorry for him, but I wonder how long, exactly, has he been the way…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@jonas Yeah, it’s less about the time period and more how they’d recognize him. Snake has quite a lot of fame in the dragon world in the future–he’s effectively the Hercules or Achilles or any other mythical hero of the dragon world. Like, several characters of mine use “Snake’s teeth” as an expression.
So I would do it, except it’d be a little…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@evelyn-collins cool beans, is he in the story? probably not because the timeline wouldn’t match up no matter how you tweaked it. He’d always end up like 15 years younger than Leo lol
But you can always make a different AU for him to inhabit. Maybe one where tech never died? Maybe he was just hurt or something? (My profile pic depicts him as a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed My brother plays a WW2-themed Roblox shooter game which has the Battle of Castle Itter as a map in it, and I think he says he likes playing there. That’s how I know about it lol
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
O_O I’m not sure I want to see this scene.
Poor villains. They can seem nice at times, and we as the authors know what they really need, they just never choose it.
I did once have my twin feeling kinda bad for one villian though, untill I told her he murders his brother.
She doesn’t like him now at all for some reason.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Still. *crosses arms* XD
I do understand though. Most of my antagonists are the MCs, but I do have a several villains and antiheros scattered through out.
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Koshka posted an update 2 years, 6 months ago
“I was quite safe. That is why the Lion kept on my left. He was between me and the edge all the time.”
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Freedom! *Slams hands down on table* Why are you trying to make me sympathetic for Hans? I thought he was a villian. This is not allowed!
Because I may get too attached. *Sniffles and storms away*
Interesting scene though. XD
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