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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Leo
He slowly turned back towards Rory with a sigh. “I’m not sure. Silvia just called in to say she’s being followed.”
Rory’s eyes widened. Leo nodded.
“That’s what I’m afraid of. I told her to cut and run, but that doesn’t mean she’s headed straight out. She’s good at what she does, but…”
Leo grimaced, smiled, and started…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
(AHHHHH…I accidentally refreshed before I sent it in.)
This is so awesome y’all. XD
Quincy
He was riding a cloud! A giggle escaped as he flopped onto his back. In another moment he had yanked off his shoes and was waving bare toes in the air.
“I like your cloud.”
The grown up kid was babbling about being…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
I’ve got a ton of homework to get done before this evening, so I’m sorry if this is short. I’ll try to RP again tonight, but we’ll see.
Leo
He looked over at Rory and smiled. “I mean that the God who has the power to speak the whole universe into being, loves us and knows exactly where we are. There’s no reason for me to…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
I’ve got a castle, a minecart track, and a bridge to the mainland.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Four maps show the whole thing.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
A funny pool I found on a corner of the island that looks just like a cross.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Was it @calyhuge who suggested seed 2 for a Minecraft world?
I have some awesome pictures of it:
View from above my currently unfinished castle. I have a texture pack and a couple mods on so don’t mind the guys down there and the weirdly patterned wall.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
kinda random but what did you think of my writing style and prose? Is it a little annoying that the character’s thoughts kinda bleed onto the page sometimes? Like this:
Sniper kept pacing. Despite his attempt to remain an emotionless interrogator, I could see the pain in his eyes. Part of me would’ve gone over to take his hand if I hadn’t been tie…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
I was re-reading it today, editing little bits–putting in better words for things and stuff, y’know, and every time I do that I’m always like “wow…I wrote this?”
As much as I make fun of it, I feel like this kinda goofy somewhat self-insert fan fiction for a video game I don’t even play has been one of my best works so far.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@theshadow oh thanks! Didn’t expect you to actually want to do it lol.
That’s perfectly fine if you’re too busy! Just tell me whenever you do have the time to write and I’ll get you that “inside information” lol
I’m assuming that means you’re pretty much finished with what I’ve got.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 3 weeks ago
but yeah I was up at like 10 two nights ago drafting a scene that won’t even make it into my WIP and is just me experimenting with the characters’ personalities.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle LOL that last one
the first one too, it’s like bruh, what are parents for if they aren’t gonna teach their kids? Are we mere animals that abandon their young to fend for themselves? Like a bearded dragon lizard that leaves her eggs alone and doesn’t even recognize her babies as fellow lizards?
Seriously. Even crocodiles care…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Leo could probably use help, especially since I’m not sure yet what he’s going to do…XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@rae Sure! Although, if Ellette is concerned over Rory right now (he is kinda unstable at the moment [which is partially my faught, XD]) would you like to have him run into Silvia upstairs and end up in the same fight, just in another area? We could have them all actually meet afterward.
That’s right, although Silvia wouldn’t…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Leo
He stared for a moment in horror at the still form beside him.
Bing!
The elevator door slid open. No time to lose. Leo shoved the trashcan through. Then, carefully, he hauled Rory up onto his shoulders and carried him out of the elevator.
The lighting was dim down here. Faint oiliness hung on the air along with the sharp…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed I don’t think I have a review on Amazon or anything yet. You could just use my KP reviews.
I’ll provide you a link to my first book so you can see my name and what my books are like if you wanna point out that I’m also an author:
Hopefully that works. You could say something like…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed that’s ok with me!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint
I would pay decent money for a good set of Narnia graphic novels! It would be a little hard to do them all though.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 what do you hate about it specifically?
maybe take a break from that story and come back to it later.
If you hate your writing because you’re comparing it to someone else’s….well, just don’t. It doesn’t matter how good someone else’s story is–if it’s making you feel negative about your own writing because you think that…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@whalekeeper found another soundtrack!!
when the battle begins and twenty-four characters are spread throughout the landscape to find and kill each other, this is what echoes in their minds:
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