@thelobsterlover
Active 2 months ago- Rank: Charismatic Rebel
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 16 hours, 59 minutes ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 17 hours, 29 minutes ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 17 hours, 43 minutes ago
Three kids with emotional problems have to shut down the black market for exploding eggs.
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Koshka replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 17 hours, 53 minutes ago
Two peasants reconcile a kingdom in civil war by deciding their uncle can drown.
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Koshka replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 18 hours, 1 minute ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 1 hour ago
Huntress
We arrived at the cave. At first, Sniper and I tried to start a fire, but there was no decent wood around, so we ditched that prospect.
Felicity stayed to the back, rifling through her satchel. She had a gun in there, some ink (weird, was she a writer?), some kind of currency, and a few tickets that said they were for a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 2 hours ago
Um, yes?!? There is a great lacking of clean distopian fiction, much less christian. These book mat need work, but they’re good, and I definitely want to see them on shelves.
I can use either, but if you want editing, it might be easier for me to use email? Idk. We’ll see. If I did use email, I would probably just be sending my…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 5 hours ago
You know I’m more than happy to help with these books…*glances nervously around*
*Turns up the radio to drown out any bugs*
I’m with your brothers on this one. It needs published.
You pick how heavy I critique/edit. You’ve seen what I do over email. And I’ll probably stick with email, now that I’ve got a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 20 hours ago
@ellette-giselle lol
I was thinking maybe it’s like an adventure story or a war story and they’re all excited about that. Your other ones from what I can tell are more missionary, persecution, or godly-romance stories, and most boys I know of aren’t super into that, especially the last one. But I don’t know.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 21 hours ago
What do your brothers love so much about it?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 21 hours ago
@Ellette-giselle I will at least be there to give spelling and grammar advice. I wouldn’t pass up another great book from you!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 1 hour ago
all right, time to answer the questions:
Characters:
~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
I think your protagonists were the best.
~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?
I do agree with Hybridlore that since Fox was the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 1 hour ago
That was a short chapter, but pretty good!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 23 hours ago
Huntress
Felicity awkwardly took Sniper’s handshake before looking around at the maze. “We need to get out of here.”
“You can fly, right?” she addressed Soldier. “Could you maybe scout out a place we could take shelter for the night?”
He nodded and gave a salute before taking off, his powerful wings causing vortexes to appear in t…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Gauging Interest in a Special New RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 1 hour ago
@jonas cool! I’d join.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 1 hour ago
@ellette-giselle that’s perfect, thanks!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 1 hour ago
@ellette-giselle ^I second this.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 1 hour ago
I honestly have no idea on what my views on this whole election thing are. But I didn’t see Rowan’s conversion to be like, fake or forced or whatever.
The example of that criminal on the cross in the Bible, that happened, so I mean why can’t this one? Y’know?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 2 hours ago
@ellette-giselle That makes sense.
I was surprised to find I liked it too!! It’s just a really satisfying end to this story somehow.
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