Miriam K.

Urgent unspoken please.

@the_lost-journal

I’d personally be fine with that!!!

@hybridlore

Thank you so much!!!! That means a lot to me and it’s so encouraging <3

@keilah-h

The violence and stuff I can handle. About the only thing that would raise a red flag for me is what Rath did to Sef’s mom (I don’t remember her name), but you didn’t write that very descriptively and any discomfort I had with the scene was a me problem, not a problem with your writing.

Okay, good to know! Thanks!

I liked each of the c…

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@highscribeofaetherium

Aw man. Just a few states over, lol! 😉 Yes, that would be so cool!

@savannah_grace2009

Ahhh!!! This is such a great idea!!!!! I don’t know if I’d be allowed to do it, but I’ll be sure to ask!

I can’t next weekend because I have a youth retreat, and I’ll have to check if I’m free for the time after that. :))

@highscribeofaetherium

Next weekend I’ll be at a winter camp, but I’ll if you guys do it again I’ll tota…

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@everyone

Turns out I won’t be able to do the call this week since my family’s leaving on a trip Friday!!!
I’m sorry!!!

I’d love to do it another time though, so let me know if there’s another time that would work!!!!

I think generally early morning Saturdays would work the best, just not this coming Saturday, I’m sorry :/

@hybridlore @ellette-giselle

It would, but… then anybody on the internet could join, and we’d all see our emails anyway.

Yeahhh I agree…

I think it’s safer to just have people send Ellette their emails if they’re comfortable.

@highscribeofaetherium

AWWWW HE’S SO CUTEEE

@highscribeofaetherium

AHHHHHH YAYYY

WHAT’S ITS NAMEEEE

@highscribeofaetherium

Okay good!!!!
Thank you so much!!!

Yes, Livia is a main character now!!!!

@liberty

Good, I’m glad!

Also I should warn you guys…

My book is a *little* dark. There’s mentions of abuse, slavery, and cruelty, as well as evil and violence.

It’s not graphic. I had my mom read  it and she said I wrote it “tactfully”, because it got the point across without being too graphic or descriptive.

But just thought I’d say that if you guys are really…[Read more]

@liberty and @everyone

Is there anything specific you want us looking for?

I’m not sure….

I’m just wanting to know if the plot makes sense at all, or if it’s all over the place.

In other drafts, I used to just throw the characters at you, but now I’m trying to establish them more distinctly.

So basically…I just want to know if all the…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Aw thank you so much girl <3 that means a lot!!!!!!!!!!!

And don’t worry about it!!!!! If you can, yeah, just let me know!

@keilah-h

Okay!!!

Sounds good!!!!!!

@whalekeeper

I actually love that Liv is younger but thought to herself that Aubrielle needs the resources more. It’s only a little contrast (to the ‘save the resources for the youngest’ trope) but does a lot to show her personality.

Aww thanks!!! That means a lot <3

Yeah Liv’s pretty sweet!!!! I love her so muchhhh

@keilah-h

Yes I’d read it!!!!!!!

@keilah-h

Wow you do read fast!!!!!!!!!!

XDXD

What did you think???

@theducktator

Sounds good!

@esther-c

😂😂🤣