Miriam K.

@savannah_grace2009

Oooh, cool chapter! Love it!! And of course, love Marcurious. 😁

You wanted to critique my writing too, I think? If you want you can use the same link, or I can make you a new doc. Whichever you prefer (:

This link works for me! Unless you want all our comments to be separate. I’ll try to start reading it next week once our s…[Read more]

@rae

I could add Rylee! She’s a character from another WIP that is going nowhere XD (how old is Junior again? 18, right?)

@esther-c

Liv

“Yeah, I do,” she pursed her lips. “It’s just me, my mani and pani,” she smiled. “And Xandro. I consider him family, too.  Where are you from?”

@jonas

Oops! I didn’t even notice that XD I will fix that!!

@grcr

Marcurious is between 16 and 18. I haven’t really figured that out yet haha!

@scoutfinch180

It’s completely fine, no rush on how fast you give me feedback! (: I understand we all have lives outside of writing and KP xD

I can get started on giving you my opinion on the excerpt I saw introducing Marcurious tomorrow perhaps.

Actually, I would prefer if you gave your opinion on the first few chapters of my WIP and kind of go…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Also I forgot to mention…I don’t have all the exerpts from my WIP here on this forum. I will post them for you on here if you agree to help me. (because I didn’t want to take up a bunch of pages on here for no reason haha)

WHY IS THIS NOT WORKING?!?!

@scoutfinch180

@scoutfinch18o

Heyyy, I don’t think we’ve really met! I’m Sara (which you probably already knew haha!)

I have been stalking the topic where you’ve been critiquing RAE’s WIP…and I really like your critiquing style!

I was wondering…if you could maybe….critique mine too….?

I understand if you don’t have the time to help two people…I…[Read more]

@esther-c @acancello @grcr @vinagirl @hybridlore

Introducing….Marcurious!!!

Here’s the newest chapter I wrote in my WIP:

Marcurious deftly snatched a ripe apple from the market stall, and sauntered away, holding his head high as if without a care in the world.

He pasted a look of innocence on his face.

I didn’t steal this apple. Nope. I p…

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@esther-c

I love those characters SOOO much!!!!!! And their character arcs are amazing!

@anyone-who-needs-a-good-cry

I just wrote something very depressing and sad….so if anyone wants to read it…well…

A dull throbbing sensation at the back of her neck.

Anger burning hot in her veins.

Screams echoing around her, both her own, and the screams of innocent souls.

The smell of alcohol, of chloroform, of pain, of fear.

The smell…

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@acancello

How do you not eat sugar?!?! I would die haha! It’s not that I’m one of those people who love food too much (if you know what I mean XD) but I love being able to eat whatever I want and enjoying sweets from time to time.

I think it would be really cool if we could all coordinate a time to meet up somewhere (when we all can drive and…[Read more]

@acancello

Lol! Between me and my grandma we have enough food to last us all week XD

I know it’s not the best habit…but when I’m sad or depressed I eat ice cream and stuff like that…we have tons of ice cream and cookies and Grandma brought popcorn cake and khuchen (a German dessert) and I just made brownies…because we already don’t have…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Thanks!! Yeah, I will!

So, it’s realistic. I almost said contemporary, but I think I’m going to have it take place in the 90s. Because my dad lived in New Mexico for a few years, and I believe it was during that time. So I’m going to pick his brain and try to make it as realistic as possible. I won’t put it in the same town but I m…[Read more]

Apparently I had already made that exact post before so I had to add an extra emoji XD

@freedomwriter76

😭😭😭

@freedomwriter76

WHYYYYYYYYY? THIS IS SO SAD!

@freedomwriter76

Doesn’t he die without being redeemed?

Idk, that’s just what I heard I think…