@theducktator
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
😂
Marcel
“Hey, hey, hey!” Marcel separated the two with a guarding hand. “We will not kill anybody. And I will not allow unnecessary attacks. Do you both understand?”
Hugo
The group passed the lobby bar. Hugo stopped to grab Victor and Lois cups of hot chocolate, and to grab a thermos.They…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 12 out now!
I was talking to my sister last night about the story, and we decided on a couple of things that would make us both more comfortable reading and writing in the story, which would also make things less awkward for the characters. However, I still will not rewrite…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year ago
I would say keep any gender issues out of MG. I was reading MG at 7ish, and my parents never told me about any of that stuff until I was a teen. Finding out about it, even from a Biblical perspective, would have traumatized tiny me.
That’s a valid point! What I meant is illustrated anyway in a decent book. Have your characters behave…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year ago
Yeah for real. My group of middle school girls ironically happens to be mostly homeschooled, but one of the other leaders has a group that is mostly public schoolers, and you can clearly see the difference. Quite often, I’ll come away from our small group time encouraged by the fact that my girls were sharing testimonies of things…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Agh yes I am lol
I’ve missed being on here :/
I’ve been so busy between school and work! (I recently got a job at a coffee shop which is good because I get money! But hard because I don’t have as much free time anymore!)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@theducktator @whalekeeper @esther-c @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @theshadow @grcr
I wrote some new chapters!
They’re really, REALLY rough but hopefully you guys enjoy them
(It gives me motivation to be able to share what I wrote with people, so thank you for supporting me 😊💜)
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year ago
Same kinda situation for us! Glad you’re all okay!!
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year ago
Praying!! Is it over?
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Mateo
Mateo suddenly stopped playing. “How about I end yours?” His voice became lower, his eyes pierced Celarent’s, striking fear into him in Mateo’s unnatural way.
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Esther started the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year ago
Hey guys!!
So as I step away from one project for a while to let it simmer before I tackle the third draft, I need another longer length project to work on. I thought about starting on an idea that’s been rolling around in my head for a couple months, but I’ll need to do a lot of research and don’t feel like doing that yet, lol.
So! I’ve been wa…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Hallie NO. I spent that whole scene with that sinking feeling that a character was about to do something stupid and she did. *sigh*
👀🫢
🤭
My dad is only 5’8” and he’s still 10 times the man that your Patrick is, Hallie. *glares*
Lemme just say, if there’s ever a sequel, Patrick’s coming back…
And you’ll prolly see what I mean by…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @hybridlore @theducktator @anyoneinterested
Some days we kinda forget,
Some WIPS will never go on.
Gotta get the rest of it done,
All the way to the Silver Star.
(Far away, through writer’s block so bold.)
*cough cough*
Although it’s been neglected, it has not been abandoned. We have another chapter!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter the 11th is out. I’m not too happy with this. I’m not sure I got Martha right in here and this kind of feels like a filler event. (Though it still moves the story forward.) I will press on.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Help on writing an impactful last day in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Like the others said, that depends on your characters. (They had some great advice.)
I think it would also depend on how expected/tragic the death was. While doesn’t necessarily lessen grief, it makes a lot of difference in how one processes it. (I think. Not an expert.) In some ways it would be worse, especially if they were…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic A Narrative of the Squirrels and the Ducks in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
No worries! Thanks for responding!
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RAE replied to the topic Help on writing an impactful last day in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
First off, funny forum signature.
Second, what are the ages of your characters? because in my experience, different ages respond differently to death. Children (under 10 maybe?) usually know that death exists, but aren’t very afraid of it because they don’t understand. Adults, especially people in their 20s, and 40s, for whatever…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @ellette-giselle @rae @keilah-h @smiley @theducktator @grcr @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-idk-lol
and the rest of the main part of the Baumann fam (also in the 1928 story🤭)
From left to right:
Top: Hans, Eleanor, Himmler (Hans/Felix’s younger brother)
Bottom: Johann, Arndt, Lee (Hans/Ele…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Sorry I took so long. My braincells for RPs seem to have died for a while.
Maverick
Maverick gave her a faint smile, giving Navin a quick glance. Navin’s eyes were wide, and frantically looking between the two as if one of them would abruptly explode.
“I do like those,” Maverick began, “Also, I apologize for plummeting onto the…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @ellette-giselle @rae @keilah-h @smiley @theducktator @grcr @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-idk-lol
part of the Baumann fam in 1928 (the year Felix/Frida got married…and the year that I’m setting a new for fun short story in🤭👀)
From left to right:
Top: Felix, Frida, Adolphus, Dietrich
Bottom: Leo,…[Read more]
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