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@raxforge (you haven’t read this one yet) @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @hybridlore

So, I haven’t finished this one yet, but it’s getting long so I’m gonna post it in two parts.

Also, I posted a section of this story above, and I will be making that section bold so that those who already read it can skip with ease.

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@keilah-h

I just realized that the reply I wrote for you didn’t post. Sorry.

He caught pneumonia, at least, that’s what I wrote his symptoms to fit, I never officially name it in the story.

@highscribeofaetherium oooh I didn’t know this was a thing! As soon as you’re done with Ellette’s, can I ask you for a character?

@linus-smallprint

Awesome! Thanks so much for reading it! I’m looking forward to hearing what you think of the rest of it.

Good point, I hadn’t noticed that, but it totally makes sense. I’m planning to rewrite the first chapter anyway, so I’ll try to take that into account when I do.

Wow, that’s terrible. That kind of thing hasn’t happened to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I have no problem throwing a book across the room. (I did that once. Right off the top of the bunk bed and into the bedside trash. I was proud of that shot) but it’s sad when you’ve spent money on the book, so thanks for saving me that for several of these. 🙃

Your welcome!

Do you have access to any audiobook library? That’s oft…[Read more]

@anybody who wants to see but @theshadow specifically

here’s a quick sketch I did of Old Hunter’s face!

@esther-c all righty!

@hybridlore

Up to the 6th chapter. Liking it so far. It looks like your opening is well-structured for the most part. I feel drawn in and can feel the tension. Sara finding the religion stuff interesting when others seem to think it boring or not worth their time makes her a character I want to follow.

One thing. From the opening scene, I was…[Read more]

@esther-c cool!! I’ll totally read it, if only for fun! Might pick out a couple of grammar mistakes here and there or tell you if  there’s a better way for a sentence to flow, but other than that I don’t think I’ll be critiquing much.

@elishavet-pidyon

Narnia was the first thing we seriously made up fanfics for that I remember. It was bonkers, but fun.

yesss early fanfics are always bonkers.

My first fanfic was a wacky Star Wars one where all the characters from the original trilogy rented a yacht and sailed around this one planet….?

@ellette-giselle well, I’ll be here if you ever need to talk about family drama. My dad’s family is nowhere near as bad as yours from what I can tell, but they can be really dramatic, so I totally understand.

@ellette-giselle

Do you think it’s worth it despite objections, or does the bad override any good you might get out of it in your opinion?

I think this one is skippable. Overall, I didn’t enjoy the story, and not just because of the content concerns.

Wow. I wrote a lot there, didn’t I…

@ellette-giselle

You want to get into Sanderson more, eh?

I’m honestly stunned that Brandon can write Alcatraz and Tress. They are so different! He’s skilled!

Yes. And Mistborn is another thing altogether.

great book, and thanks for the recommendation (indirect or not)

You’re welcome!

I have really wanted to read the Nightmare Painter one, (I saw…

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@ellette-giselle wowwww that’s crazy.

he was abandoned and grew up on the streets or in and out of orphanages and foster care.

That explains his junky family at least.

also yeah, I enjoyed the revised chapter!! Makes me even more worried for their family now, cause it seems like they have a pretty good one.

@theshadow

Whenever I’m alone and can’t find anyone in the house I assume they’ve been Thanos snapped or something lol.

exactlyyyyy

@ellette-giselle

(He didn’t grow up with his parents and this is only his second time meeting this people.)

Where’d he grow up, then? Just wondering, not tryna judge or anything.

@whalekeeper certainly!

@ellette-giselle

we’ve been here fighting legal battles in Idaho for over a week, and we have to stay at least one more… but maybe two. And my best friend is leaving for a new state this month and this was the last month we had to spend together, and now she might leave before I get back

oh that’s horrible! I’m sorry you had to go through tha…[Read more]