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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
*Blink* Holy cow! I was gone for like 6 hours and I see 3 more pages, lol.
Flare, Ben Gunn – With Baron, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge
Ben was clenching his throat. “Hey, I could’ve fought back, I just decided not to.”
“Sure, that’s what happened.” Flare rolled his reptile eyes. “I’m Flare. Hope you liked my song.” H…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Good point!
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Yeah, more melodies on extra strings would just take more skill practice and concentration. That’s a great limit to the magic system because it would require study.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
I think it makes sense? lol. Yeah, I get what you mean. If that’s the case, harp—which is similar to piano, in my understanding—could have the potential to have many voices but a lot of times is used to play chords (at least, with the left hand.) Same with guitar. Violin, two strings aren’t normally played but it isn’t uncommon. Lots of t…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
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Esther replied to the topic What's new around here? < 3 in the forum Questions and Support 2 weeks, 4 days ago
I’m finally getting back into a schedule!! And, I’ve started working more on writing. I have a WIP series now too, which makes me so excited!! This will be my first serious-going-to-be-published book. At least, if that’s God’s will.
That’s so exciting!! That would be amazing!!
By the way, how does RP work? How do write a story that way?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Where is the line between a chord and just playing more than one note at a time? How does this change the Strings?
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Marcel —- Edge of Deepwild
Marcel didn’t think long about the questions the girl asked, since every one of them confused and irked him. He still felt half asleep, wisps of color blowing out from behind him and waving at the night sky. He met all of their eyes and backed up, so the four people stood in a circle. “Li…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Yeah, three strings would be interesting. I think violin is a good option, but something similar to a guitar or small harp would be even better.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@ellette-giselle 😭😭😭
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hybridlore and Ellette Giselle are now friends 2 weeks, 4 days ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@jonas By the way, I also love the magic that Ilahna has. Super creative. And yes, violins can usually only play two strings at once, but it is slightly harder than playing one. You can play a brief chord on 2+ strings but it is staggered… if that makes sense, meaning you will technically only be playing two strings at one time. Idk if that…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Okay, I updated the chapter. Let’s see what you think now.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Hmm… Stripe jumps on Tyn and is preoccupied with that fight? (Though it probably would not last longer than 2 seconds…) Rour attempts to debate with Stripe, saying his quaral is only with Alan and any who stand in the way (Which is why he arrested Martha)? He may be asking to leave peacefully with Alan and Tyn, promising to…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
A week passed.
This feels a little odd right at the start of the book. I can see why you’re doing this, you’re trying to show us how over time he is adjusting, so I wouldn’t say it is a bad thing. It just feels unusual.
Joseph looked away. After a few minutes he heard Joseph’s voice in the kitchen. Sabina said something, and t…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
YIKES! You changed your pic!
He he!
Anyhow, I don’t know why I even brought that up. I guess because it gives me recoil whenever I see it.
That’s fair. I feel the same way about ‘you do you’.
I’m trying to rework Chapter the 22nd like you suggested, but am a little stuck on what to do with Stripe. With Alan down, he would p…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Have you guys tried homemade apple butter spread?
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Apple noodles? Whaaaaaaat are those?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@theshadow yeah, they do lol
I think I figured it out some though.
Sniper, like the rest of his team, fears nearly nothing, except magic of any kind. (Listening to some of his voicelines on Halloween-exclusive game modes, he seems utterly terrified at the concept of being attacked by a wizard or ghost.)
Obviously Silvanis and Fairy’s powers…[Read more]
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