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@whalekeeper

I’m very late to the party, but I’ll listen to some of those songs in a sec

Yay!! 😊

@theducktator

There is always Alaska.

@keilah-h

Most of your questions will be answered in the next section. Thank you for your feedback!

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, I gotcha. But it did catch me off guard.

I feel like he won’t … but I could be wrong. And if he betrayed them, he probably wouldn’t come back.

@freed_and_redeemed

Ohhh, they look so good!!!

@ellette-giselle

The new section looks good too! It did confuse me when, in the letter, they mentioned that Jews were not better than Greeks. This seems kind of out of place in your fantasy world. Maybe cut that sentence, or you could put, Ardentans are not greater than those of the Empire? Or something like  that.

Anyway, good job! I’m ro…[Read more]

I spent my whole shower time thinking about this and I can explain a little better. Taking quotes from Book 1.

Chapter the 5th

Tyn watched her friend. She did not know what to say to him. Every time he had gotten in a mood like this before, she had told him he had full control over whether or not he used magic. Now she wondered if he really might…

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@linus-smallprint

So you’re saying she is motivated by independence, realizes this command from the king makes her look controlled, and so tries to justify it through her own moral code to still feel independent? Makes sense. But is something keeping her from switching sides in the first place? (Just digging a little)

@ellette-giselle @elishavet-pidyon

Forgot to reply quickly 😅 Yes I would appreciate any research you already have! I’ve already got tons of reading to do for the main parts of my thesis, and psychology is part of it, so any help is welcomed – although I’m going to look for articles on my own anyway. I’m trying to find ways of cutting time becau…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

The new section looks good. Sorry, I was at co-op and then had a lot of notifs when I got back so it was a little overwhelming.

Whatever happened to the prince. . . *shudders* Creepy. Hopefully Leon and Julian will get to talk to him soon.

@ellette-giselle @hybirdlore @theducktator @keilah-h

The Final Story.

Please note that I might drastically change this one later since I’m not 100% happy with it, but I’ve been changing and playing with this story for so long now that I feel like I need to post it, gather your thoughts (tips for how to make the story better and criticism very…[Read more]

@koshka bruh

First off, that’s one quarter, not one third, second, why did they have to put “60 million” and “20 million” twice?

@whalekeeper

That’s terrible. Praying!! 🙏

Prayers for a beautiful old church down the road from ours. It has a lot of lovely history, all the way from the late 1800s, with families buried there. But the congregation is tiny and mostly comprised of the elderly. They can barely keep up membership. The pastor got into a tractor accident, was paralyzed, and died yesterday. It was very sudden…[Read more]

I was music starved this week and added more songs to Marcel’s playlist. Enjoy if you feel like it; they’re all good songs. Teardrop by Massive Attack, One Headlight by The Wallflowers, To Be Alright by Aurora, Running Up That Hill by Kate Bush.

@grcr

I’m very late to the party, but I’ll listen to some of those songs in a sec

@raxforge @theducktator

😂 I feel that if these characters did not try to accept differences, there would be an active fight by this point.

Marcel

Responding to Mateo first, Marcel shrugged his shoulders one by one. “Immortal, undead. I see where you’re coming from.”

He looked at the other kid. This boy was still nameless, but looked much…[Read more]

@raxforge

I’m glad! You’re welcome!

@the_lost-journal That’s great!

Keep the creatures by the way. They’re all really cool.