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@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter 15 is out gang!

I think I need to rethink this chapter a little. I have no intensive to take James side in here, it just seems like he is being irrational for no reason. I also really need to work on Sara. She has zero character development because I’ve only just thrown her…[Read more]

@liberty nice! I’m guessing he has some connection to wolves/dogs?

@linus-smallprint I’ll check it out!

Oooohh, this is such a fun topic. I loved reading y’all’s ideas. And @trailblazer, I know that game! We have it, I think. The story is really cool.

The first story that I ever wrote (that I can remember) was about a cat. I don’t remember the cat’s name (or his friends’ names) but it involved rescuing another cat from a tree and the most anticlima…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @theshadow @keilah-h @koshka @whalekeeper

The final two chapters of Part 1 are out! I did tag a few of you on Docs, but I just wanted to let you know on here since I didn’t post yesterday. KP wasn’t working. 🙁

@liberty

It looks great!! Ellette has a character named Beric too. XD

@linus-smallprint

I didn’t get the first notification! I’ll try to remember to look at it when I have a chance.

@ellette-giselle

Stripe with the girl hugging him? Didn’t you see that one? Or are you referring to the generic Kunulf with the crossbow?

The climbing one was for an essay I write about a year ago on whether or not it is okay for Christians to write fiction. I wanted to have it published on here, which is why I joined this site, but the Kingdom…[Read more]

*Right. I meant to say right, not left

@grcr

Thank you!

Oh, yes, I did see this. Prolly should’ve said something, sorry about that. I started reading it this morning actually—I’m at chapter seven. What kind of feedback is your sister looking for?

I think she just wants to know what you think of the characters, world, and story. She may have some questions for you to answer once you a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Whoops! Accidentally tagged myself instead of you

@linus-smallprint

Here you go: https://drive.proton.me/urls/7FTVZ5ZDVR#qZ3ixOGvq1e0

@linus-smallprint

Oh, yes, I did see this. Prolly should’ve said something, sorry about that. I started reading it this morning actually—I’m at chapter seven. What kind of feedback is your sister looking for?

@ellette-giselle

Give me one second, and I will share with you a document showing you how to do this.

@ellette-giselle

Site glitches are downright annoying.

I didn’t know that proton did that with docs.

You use Proton, right? Well that’s a way you can share your work without posting it directly on Kingdom pen. You can invite specific people to it, or create a share link that you can take down any time you want.

@ellette-giselle @stephie @grcr @hybridlore @theducktator

Just checking, did you see this?

I should probably tag some more people as well:

@whalekeeper @liberty @raxforge @rae @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon

None of you have to read this, but I do want to make sure this notification is coming through. And my sister would greatly appreciate…[Read more]

@loopylin

Ellie always gets it

@theducktator

Woww Celarent.. 🤣 Looks like you disapprove of change.

Even the teacher was in a tree.

I think my brain needs rewiring. Reading this, I immediately pictured Barnes as a stuck cat. With sophisticated cat clothes and everything.

@elishavet-pidyon

Your style is so smooth and descriptive. 😊

@linus-smallprint

….I had no idea about safety concerns and google…I’ll have to look into that

It’s barely working on my end. @godlyfantasy12 I’m sorry for responding an hour late because that’s how long it took to get in.