FIREQUACKER

@ellette-giselle

🙄 Ugh.

But why? 😭

I wanna do whatever I want. I is the author.

Do you have your Literary Licence from Bagsworth Books like Bastille?

Does this mean you think they’re gonna get out of this one alive?

I think so. It’s still early in the book. You could kill them all off and switch to a different character at this point as the p…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

why?

For the reason Leon mentioned. Reflexes happening faster than recognition.

The next morning, Julian woke to the sound of voices and banging. He leapt to his feet and yanked on his boots. Leon was already pulling on his hat and beat him into the other room.

When Julian arrived, he found Martin, Aelic, Leon, and Aiden all…

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@ellette-giselle

Love this section! You did a great job of bringing in Julian’s character and his thoughts, like when he remembered the burning building. Their last exchange is so funny. XD

The fireman’s carry imo is harder than piggyback. I don’t care what they say.

You know story research just got real when you’re contemplating carrying your sister as many times up and down the street as you can, to test the strength vs weight in an escape scene

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint

New chapters on the Part 2 doc!

Stopped at :45. That was legitimately helpful

This is going to sound goofy, but I’m going to start an idea-generation session at :05.

@elishavet-pidyon

Those horse hooves look very good. I like the perspective and the shading in the picture. You also have a good sense of motion in there.

@whalekeeper

Your welcome! Let me know when you finish it please!

@ellette-giselle

So, the five set off for Dietenbruck.

I think you are pacing this well for a return journey

“If I was an enemy, you’d both be dead,” a voice laughed softly from behind.

Leon and Julian whipped about to see Aelic standing in the shadows.

Sneaky. But not wise.

Good section!

@ellette-giselle great job on this section!!

@ellette-giselle

I feel like they’re not going to be happy. Particularly with Aelic.

@ellette-giselle

I’m worried for Aelic…

@ellette-giselle

Ahh! I love it! I’m glad they decided to go back to the village, but… 😬

@thearcaneaxiom I know you’re not here much but……

Remember this conversation?

Me:  I can’t believe I’m doing this.

I’m asking you an Avatar The Last Airbender question.

I remember you were telling me to watch the show like your life depended on it years ago. Still like it?

You:

-Me being chronically inactive cause I’m about to serve a…

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Done at :55

Well now I have a headache and a sad scene on my hands. Tsk, tsk. Must move on to something cheerful.

Popping on to work for a while, starting at :15. I have a headache from sickness recovery, but hopefully I can write without having to look at the screen of my computer.