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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Wow.
I gotta say, it’s probably not as much of a shock as some of the other deaths, since it really felt like you were leading up to this… but still.
Keilah has a good point. I do like how you made it more hopeful at the end, and the time jump is really interesting. It’s cool to know what happened afterward.
I’m glad Rowan b…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle That makes sense.
I was surprised to find I liked it too!! It’s just a really satisfying end to this story somehow.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I love this ending!! I was worried with how dark it was looking, you were gonna leave it off on a less satisfying note. But the Fox journal was hopeful, and I honestly love how you time-skipped it into modern times. Which, interestingly, makes it seem more real to me, the fact that these places would still exist in the world we…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@the-lost-journal
Yeah, I meant the book, not the twist.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Rowan shook his head. “No, just any soldier younger than twenty-seven.”
I don’t know too much about war or armies, but I know enough to know that is a bad idea. Especially since it is the younger ones. That’s got to be more than half of his army! Is he trying to be the blood god? Yuck.
Good to see Rowan be saved and some hin…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
is that actually bad though? I haven’t done it often, and I don’t see much of another way to get that info across. Plus, I’ve used “as you know” sentences before in conversation just to help listeners make quick side connections so they can focus on the main line of thought. Idk.
Well the problem is that it is kind of weird. It…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Interesting, interesting. I’ll have to look it up.
already has way to many books to look into … it’ll be fine…….. -
-GRCR- replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 Hii Saraaa it’s been a while.
Ahhh girlie I feel you. I’ve been at a loss for inspiration lately too.
I, too, will help however I can.
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ryry's profile was updated 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Do whatever. I’m not sure really what to rp atm, since I don’t think Kepha has rped to my last rp.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I’ll jump on board any time.
Though, I don’t think Andrew will be able to since he will be gone almost all summer.
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HighScribe posted an update 1 year, 4 months ago
I’m sixteen today!! 😁
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HighScribe replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
Praying for you guys <3
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HighScribe replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
I’ll help any way I can (:
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
If you didn’t know, this is the roleplay Jonas started. I personally loved this roleplay idea and it would be nice to continue.
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Enid replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Is there something you’re struggling with that requires some brainstorming? What was that epic plot idea and why did you like it? I don’t mind helping. I like brainstorm sessions, lol.
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 4 months ago
WE GOT SECOND PLACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Idk if you know or not, but Saturday (5/24) my crew and I raced a few boats on the Connecticut River. The boat I rowed in was a woman’s four, in the second heat of a race (meaning there were too many boats for the amount of lanes so they did two separate races but compared the times as if the…[Read more] -
hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
It’s okay. Sorry I keep nagging you, but… I feel justified. I’ve had to wait on that ending for about five days.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
yeah, well that’s reality for ya.
is it really though??
(this is a joke reply, not a genuine thing you need to spend a paragraph answering and wasting your time lol)
yeah, Leon has a rough time of it, poor guy. I’ve gone back and four on writing his backstory as like a short side story novella. We’ll see though.
I think…[Read more]
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