FIREQUACKER

I got to eat a beef hot dog today 🎉

@theshadow

Lol, five might be a little generous XD

HAHAHA

one of them was likely stolen from Scout.

@theshadow

Nice to see you back! (Ha, I know I’ve already talked to you, but still. ;))

I’m not sure I’ll be able to commit to another full project right now, but I might pop in occasionally. So glad you were able to figure out some more stuff this time around, though!

@ellette-giselle ok thanks!

@ellette-giselle I was just about to tell you I haven’t caught up in a while. Which chapter was the last one I commented on? I should be able to get to it today or tomorrow.

@ellette-giselle thank you!!

I always try to ask before doing that kind of thing these days.

@ellette-giselle you’re welcome. Mind if I take the meme to post on my youtube channel on the 4th? They might find it funny.

@ellette-giselle PEAK MEME LOLLLLLLL

I love that.

now, to prevent Soldier from deciding the cookies are for him and eating them all (and getting sick afterward)

@ellette-giselle

Of course! XD

Also, you hit 4,000 posts!!

lol, yes!

@ellette-giselle

Here’s the last story as it is now. I made a few changes during CEW, but I don’t think I made many

A breeze swept over the countryside, traveling over the hills and through the meadows, before stopping to tangle a young woman’s hair at the command of the man who sat in the grass beside her.

“Baron! Why?” She whined, trying to st…

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not chapter, story *facepalm*

@ellette-giselle

If you want, I would be happy to mark that chapter up for you and give a few spots where it felt emotionally lacking to me as the reader.

That’d be great! I already have made some changes to the first part of the chapter, so I’ll head over to The Baron Chronicles topic and repost the chapter.

@ellette-giselle

np

but I honestly really liked that chapter the way it is. Like, a LOT. I don’t want you to touch it. If it’s the chapter I’m thinking of (the end one) it was one of my very favorites.

Yes, the end one. This is very interesting to me, cuz I honestly like the last short story the least. Not because of the story itself (the conce…[Read more]

@theducktator

Oh no. Praying!!

@whalekeeper @keilah-h

Would it help if I did a test piece and posted it on here so you can kinda see what it’d look like?

If I do that, I’ll probably do it tomorrow

TO ANYONE INTERESTED IN THE CHALLENGE i ATTEMPTED TODAY

I lost track of my hours, but I did get through most the Baron Chronicles. I didn’t get into the short story…[Read more]

@rae

You’re not alone when it comes to getting easily distracted.

Should I write Farewell in first person?

Hmmm, can’t say. It seemed straightforward enough in third person from what I remember.

I finished all the short stories, but I didn’t give you feedback for all of them I’m afraid. 😅

Also on the first person thing, it might work, but it also might throw everyone off, y’know? It really depends.

@rae

I think his passion is what made him the best fantasy author. If Tolkien didn’t love writing, and didn’t love the story, then it wouldn’t have been a classic. It wouldn’t have been published at all.

That’s exactly what I’m saying. He wrote great stories because he loved writing so much, not because his ability was somehow greater than other writers.

@keilah-h

Like, people go on and on about how he was basically “The Perfect Fiction Writer,” do they realize he was just a guy who was SUPER passionate about his story?

I think his passion is what made him the best fantasy author. If Tolkien didn’t love writing, and didn’t love the story, then it wouldn’t have been a classic. It wouldn’t have bee…[Read more]