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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
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grcr replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
Ah. No one “on screen” got shot, just the neighbors in the background, if that makes any sense.
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I also thought it was interesting how Elia’s comment “it’s dangerous out there” put all the danger outside, so when it was followed by cozy family time, we felt safe inside. Like the Igby Cottage in WFS. Then ev…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Ok! I’m back! @whalekeeper @rae IDK how we’re gonna collide with each other but ehh whatever.
Soldier
I beckoned with a wing toward the door, and Sniper followed me, Huntress still unconscious on his shoulders. He set her down in one of the rooms.
I decided to try to look through the cupboards in the opposite room. Maybe there was…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Lucille
None of that sounded like a definite answer, so Lucy shrugged. She was just as interested in becoming a secretary, anyway.
A clap of thunder rumbled in the distance. Bugs chirped louder as if getting their last voices in before something louder arrived. Gabriel and Lucy sped up, jogging over leaf piles and patches of heather.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
XD
Gabriel Mai
“That depends. Right now? No. You don’t have the strength nor the experience. In the future possibly, though I will say, there is yet to be a woman monster hunter where I am from. But if a woman had the will, and the strength to back it up, I guess it could be okay, though women should be protected like children…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 10 months ago
@ellette-giselle The Tangled one is me when I read my one fanfic that I spent half of 2024 writing lolllll
I vacillate between “Why did I write this, this is weird” and “This is peak writing, I love it”
The other memes are so accurate too haha
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Because she’s a diva? 🤣
Lucille
For a while, neither of them had anything to say. Lucy slipped the leather cover onto the hatchet, and they moved on, the tree’s fallen leaves trailing behind them. While they had spent time there, a darker mass of clouds had approached on the horizon and the wind howled somewhere above their heads.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 10 months ago
@rae @elishavent-pidyon @mineralizedwritings Y’all are SO GOOD how–
@linus-smallprint I love your style, it’s so cool. I don’t know if there are Narnia graphic novels, but I’d totally read one drawn like that. Your characters’ eyes are very expressive.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
He’d hate her attitude XD, but yes
Gabriel Mai
When the screaming quieted, Gabriel answered. “Pretty much, though I don’t know what a Chee-wa-wa is. Ditching them? I can’t. At the moment, the village I live in has had an increased number of attacks despite the population not growing by a large amount, and a few new varieties of…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Broooo I just realized you and Rumi from K-Pop Demon Hunters would get along
Lucille
“You save their butts from dying and they hate you because of irregularly distributed pigmentation? These people sound stupid. Chihuahua brains. You should ditch them.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel shook his head. “It isn’t proper for a Protector to share his secret with many people. Besides, if they discovered my birthmarks, the fact I’m the Protector wouldn’t save me. I’ve already been marked as a demon by my previous village, and they’ve all seen the Protector fight at some point or another.” The red…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
I don’t know who got shot!
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grcr replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
lol there was a space in the actual doc, I don’t know why it didn’t transfer over…
This seems a little odd, because 1. it is one of the more standard ways of swearing an oath, and 2. as a soldier he would know this from training and wouldn’t need to be told. I would say something like “swear the oath” etc. Something that tell…
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hybridlore replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
Good scene! I’m still not really sure what happened at the end… but yeah, I was expecting the dad to die too. 😅🥲
I like the siblings too (although their names are confusing, haha.)
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 10 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
@whalekeeper Your brother is an absolute diamond lol. Sounds like you have a good relationship with him.
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grcr replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
eeeee yay!! 😃 I’m pretty much open to all feedback… yeah.
(I actually thought the dad was gonna die in this chapter from scene 1…. so I’m relieved that he made it. XD)
LOL
It’s like a family I know, expect they have 15 kids and it’s all “J” names.
😅 I guess great minds think alike lolol
Yeah, it’s not vital. It probably wo…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
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grcr started the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
Hello hello hello.
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I’m rewriting TPE (I’ve renamed it to A Fire Within btw, so I’ll probably call it AFW instead) for the billionth time and I’m pretty happy with it so far, so I’m going to start sharing it again. Andddd… yeah. Tagging everyone I can think of atm, but feel free to ignore. I don’t want to bother anyone. 😅😅
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