TheArcaneAxiom

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btw, If anyone would be willing, I have a WIP for a 5th draft that I am trying to wrap up for publishing. I would love some f…[Read more]

@keilah-h @kyronthearcanin @rae @thearcaneaxiom @freed_and_redeemed @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @grcr

hello, for anyone who’s been reading the scenes I’ve been posting, here’s another Jonathan/Jim interaction. Jonathan is now 15, making Jim 27.

It was late one evening. Jonathan sat on his mattress and watched Jim, who was shaving with…

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@thearcaneaxiom

Whenever I try to add a link it isn’t working for some reason XD

Anyway, my site is http://www.avamurbargerauthor.com, so if this goes through the book page links to Amazon lol.

@hybridlore

Thank you so much!!! It’s still crazy, and I’m incredibly excited to share Healer with everyone.

@thearcaneaxiom

Thank you!! Yeah, I’ve been off KP for quite a while, everything’s been so busy!! Hopefully I can hop on every once in a while. And yep, that’s the story! (:

CONGRATS to @kyronthearcanin!!! She is now PUBLISHED!!!!!! 🎉🎊🎉🎊🎉🎉

@esther-c @acancello @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @freed_and_redeemed @rae @highscribeofaetherium @calyhuge @jonas @princesachronicles @thearcaneaxiom @trailblazer @everybody!

Taking some more people who have expressed interest in my story.

@highscribeofaetherium, @grcr, @keilah-h, @theducktator, @theshadow, @stephie, @theloonyone, and @thearcaneaxiom

Again, don’t feel pressure to follow this if you don’t want to/are too busy.

@whalekeeper

The greatest enjoyment I got from the prologue was the twist from ‘we’re doing this to save the baby’ to ‘what’s this baby doing here?’ That was great.

Really?!?! That’s awesome…I guess I’m keeping it now XD XD

You should think about how strong of an allegory you want. Once you say Jesus, all readers will know this is a Christian a…

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@thearcaneaxiom

You’re good!!! You’re probably busy with super cool adult stuff 🤣🤣

That means a lot!!! (:

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom (sorry to tag you again but this needs to be said)

Y’all….I just scrolled through the first 14 pages of this…

I owe you guys BIG TIME! Like you put up with me, a new, confused, emotionally unstable writer and helped me SOOOO MUCH! Words can’t describe how thankful I am that you three were there…[Read more]

@grcr @esther-c @freed_and_redeemed @thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @acancello (I’m still going to tag you until you come back) @anyone-else

See above post ⬆⬆⬆

Imma just go ahead and tag everybody again…

@theducktator @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @freed_and_redeemed @smiley @whalekeeper @theshadow @mineralizedwritings @grcr @rae @loopylin @acancello @keilah-h @hybridlore @beth-torres @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @thearcaneaxiom @everyoneee

Welcome peoples! If you don’t know what this is abo…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

I finished reading the chapters you shared. As I’ve said before, you have an interesting world and concepts.

Your robot character, Thing, reminds me of that annoying NPC character in video games who is supposed to help you but ends up only being annoying, forcing you to go through tutorials for things you already know and not…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Continuing our conversation from ‘Hello, there!’ in ‘Start HERE’.

I also support the not helping them thing, there’s lots of curses in scripture that are never lifted, such as the fall (of course this is lifted through Christ, and will be conqured in the end, but from a purely temporal prospective at least.)

That’s the idea. I h…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Great review. This is pretty much what I expected. It’s interesting that you brought up the lying thing, since Tress kinda did that as well, where as her character got more mature, she was more and more willing to bend the rules of what she thought were hard lines of right and wrong.

It did not bother me as much in Tress. This w…[Read more]

My Review:

@thearcaneaxiom, I know you wanted to know my thoughts on this book.

Please note that I was listening to this instead of reading it. Feel free to correct me on any butchered spelling/quotes.

Author: Brandon Sanderson

Year: 2023

Genres: Fantasy, Sci-fi, Action

Intro:

Waking up in the medieval field. a man discovers he has no…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

I’d say that could still be seen as a curse. The word curse is a bit vague anyways, and everyone carries different connotational baggage. I like the idea, but it’s entirely up to you. Perhaps the crystals use substances left by other animals, and become like those animals. It just becomes a side effect instead of something int…

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