TheArcaneAxiom

@thearcaneaxiom

Yes, Rishona does represent Eve in the prologue.  And I do agree that I use flowery language excessively. I love your ideas, because you have helped me realize things about myself I never have before!

And about the paragraph you wrote….

“Ahh, yes, I suppose you wouldn’t know,” he said airily. The dismissive comment trigge…

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@thearcaneaxiom : I’m sorry I made that look so confusing!

thanks @jonas for helping me!

@thearcaneaxiom

um apparently i did something wrong, hope this still makes sense? sorry, this was my first time quoting someone…

@thearcaneaxiom

okay i’m gonna attempt to quote, something I’ve never done before so bear with me if this doesn’t make sense at all:

Oh wow I never thought about it like that! I was just thinking that the prologue would be how the world of Andromeda took a turn and how evil was let into the world. No, Earth and Andromeda don’t represent Adam…[Read more]

@trailblazer @thearcaneaxiom @acancello

if you’re interested, here’s some of my writing if you wanted to give me feedback 🙂 if you don’t want to that’s okay, its just I’m trying to get beta readers to critique what I have so far before I move on to any other chapters.

@thearcaneaxiom

I love solving problems! It becomes a race against myself to see how many I can get right before the class period ends at school.

I’m so excited for people on Kingdom Pen to read my work because when I show it to my parents, they don’t appreciate it because they aren’t into fantasy/suspenseful stories/sci fi stuff, so I need a…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

I love math too, however I’m not very good at it, I tend to get confused. I also write sci-fi/fantasy! I read a little of everything, though.

I kind of do both hard and soft worldbuilding, but I haven’t been doing it that long, it’s more of a recent project. I think I like hard more, but haven’t done enough to know for sure.

I…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yep the notifs arent working, and as @thearcaneaxiom said the page formatting is weird. But this has happened before a while ago, so it hopefully will get fixed again!

@thearcaneaxiom

Actually that helps me think through my problem better – I have templates available for when I need them, internal conflict and all, I’m just blocked when it comes to the what if questions. As in, I don’t know what to explore. But it could be that I need to take a break and come back to it later with a fresh mind. Thank you 😋

@thearcaneaxiom

*Telepathy link* Exactly!! There are a million ideas that can’t come from a particular set, and where are you supposed to find templates for them? That’s why you make your own, once you know your concept well enough.

When you really think about it, the what if questions look for things completely outside of anything already cre…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Thanks for reminding me of the mechanics topic, I was going to comment but never got around to it…

Yeah – actually, that has definitely been on my mind lately, because I often find myself switching to a better main character who was originally meant to be only supporting. It’s a strange process, but it works for me, because…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

I don’t absolutely hate good dragons, but at this point it is more common than evil dragons and I find it annoying. As far as the symbolism goes, I’ve never read a story where a dragon represented something good, and in my opinion it’s best not to change the traditional imagery. That isn’t to say you couldn’t use a dragon to rep…[Read more]

Forgot to tag you on the previous one @thearcaneaxiom

@thearcaneaxiom

Yes. I have quite a lot. I have…four(?)…planet ideas so far I think.

Adonial is the planet that my main project takes place on. It is the most generic, with a medieval theme and dragons and stuff. I have the most decided on for this one. I might post some of it later. This one doesn’t have a well-developed magic system yet, becau…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Thanks! I think it’s more true than the original quote lol!

@thearcaneaxiom

Definitely! I think I’m just kind of invested in Stormlight right now, so it will be hard for me to go to something else until I read KoWT.

@thearcaneaxiom

I think it has a Mistborn novella, so idk what else it would be.

@thearcaneaxiom

Idk. I know a lot about the Cosmere already, even though I’ve only read Mistborn era 1 and Stormlight. I don’t know any plot details about Warbreaker or Elantris, but I know some other details about them.