TheArcaneAxiom

@raxforge

Sure! I can’t RP until later though. School. 🙁

@anyone I’m going to send Celarent somewhere else.

Celarent

Celarent glanced uneasily at the janitor talking to the water elemental. He didn’t trust chaps with more limbs than considered normal. Not that he trusted anyone else either, but it would be too easy to pick pockets with hands like that. He summoned a gust of wind and flew down a nearby hallway.

thread, not forum :p

@artist-peoples-idk

Would anyone be interested in starting an art/illustration critique forum? Just curious, I think it might be fun, but I want to know if other people would want to before I create a new topic. Idk, just an idea. If nobody likes the idea that’s fine.

I can share more of what I had in mind if anyone would like.

@loopylin

Ryla

Ryla smiled gratefully at Liko. At least she would have one friend here. But there was another thing bothering her. “I’ve heard rumors of a dance. Is that mandatory?”

@ellette-giselle

This one notified me.

@ellette-giselle

No I didn’t. I’ve just been stalking that forum so I know what’s going on.

@whalekeeper

I think for me, the most obvious way I can think of that one of my hobbies has bled into my writing life is my Boardgaming hobby. In my main WIP the political mastermind character is also a really big tabletop gamer and uses that as a metaphor for his political machinations.

@the_lost-journal

I’d say The Princess Bride was a tie.

@keilah-h

Jurassic Park is a book?

@hybridlore

I’m in Sunrise Peak as well!

Yeah, i guess so 🤷🏻‍♀️

@keilah-h @hybridlore

Thanks ladies!!

I’m kinda nervous to submit it, but idk why 🫣😂

@whalekeeper

Honestly, their economic system makes no sense. They just have infinite money???

@whalekeeper

Yes! It’s back!

My love of dance has influenced my attitude toward critique a lot. It’s taught me to want corrections. One thing my favorite ballet teacher always says is that listening to your corrections is the best way to improve, and I’ve heard variations of this from the other teachers as well. The aforementioned favorite…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Oh wow, you’re an adult now. Yeah, paperwork, insurance, college, taxes, a job…good luck! XD

@loopylin @liberty

*screeches* Fiends! Thou shalt pay for this!

@hybridlore

Ooh, that looks fun! I think I’ll join the July one.

@esther-c

Sorry I’m just now getting to this!!!!

My main critique would be that you spend a lot of time on dialogue. I kind of feel like we just got thrown into the story and all we know about the characters is because of what they say. Maybe breaking up some dialogue and really showing us who they characters are would help…it kind of feels l…[Read more]

@liberty @keilah-h @theducktator @hybridlore

Ok! So I’m not posting this as soon as I wanted, lol, but this is the almost final draft and I’d like your thoughts again if y’all are willing.

I didn’t change any of the tenses or add words because I wanted it to sound very “in the moment” if that makes sense. I did add a couple of things that hopefu…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

tbh, I am also confused about the teachings  XD And I do wonder why. But also I get this feeling of fullness after going to confession. So whatever it is, I think I am going to stick to it! Also  thanks for the prayers. I won’t be able to get back to anyone for a while btw. I AM GOING SKIING! ^o^

I agree, it does help to tell oth…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

okay hahahaha sounds good lol

@whalekeeper

no I haven’t!!!