TheArcaneAxiom

@keilah-h

I feel like I always write the most when I post on KP or when I know people will read it…

It’s so cool to see writers supporting other writers <3

@whalekeeper

Heeyy Sara, I’m about a third through your story right now! What kind of critique do you want? Any specific concerns, stuff like that?

Ummmm

Let me think lol

I think I’m just worried about pacing, flow of the story, and if it’s at all interesting lol

And character development ideas would be helpful too!!

I also just want to know t…[Read more]

LILITU’S NICKNAME IS TULIPS???????

Yeah lol

you can thank one of the boys from my school for that one XDXD

The frog wedding is adorable.

I KNOWWWW

YOU KILLED NEVEAH?!?!?!

no comment….

@theducktator

 I just finished your prologue. It’s good, but you overuse italics.

NOOOOOO
IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO USE ITALICS

😱😱😱😱

*sobs hysterically*

Oh my goodness, they kissed!!!!

yesssss

*coughs* um yeah…chapter three is kinda dark I guess 😂😂

@the_lost-journal

I think we just have different definitions of sacraments.

@thearcaneaxiom

*Steals your questions*

What do you think is the very most important element to the Christian identity? In other words, what tells you whether someone is a true Christian or not?

I would say you can tell if someone is a true Christian by whether they…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

The new one.

@loopylin

True. It’s small and cute though.

@whalekeeper

But why though.

@the_lost-journal

I feel like it was a little foolish for the other denominations to remove so many!

The reason our denomination only has two is because a sacrament should be for everyone, and not everyone is called to be healed or married or ordained. However, everyone can and should be baptized and take communion.

@linus-smallprint

Yeah, that’s more accurate. XD

@rae

Boppable: To want to tap or lightly punch something you think cute.

I made it up XD

So like my littlest sister’s nose. XD

@the_lost-journal

Lol, your signature!

@linus-smallprint

From what I know of your second book, Kalmar does seem kind of accurate. If he has a redemption arc, I would compare him to Edmund Pevensie.

@the_lost-journal

How do you say Ahava? Uh-hah-vah? I like it (well, I guess I shouldn’t say that when I don’t know how it’s actually pronounced, but it looks like it would sound pretty 😅). If you like it and can’t think of any particular reasons not to keep it, I’d say go with it.

As for Thomas… hmm… is there a certain style/ethnicity of…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Hey girl, sorry I haven’t really read more of your WIP yet.  I’ve been pretty busy (which is why I kind of vanished for a few days). I’ll try to read some more and get you some feedback sometime this week.

Um, yes!! I would love to see aesthetics!! You don’t even have to ask, girl. XD

Oh wait, you just defined it. XD

@rae

I need that mug sooo bad! Your profile pic is awesome, by the way.

Define “boppable”?

@stephie

Hallelujah! 🥳

@stephie

That’s awesome!! Praise the Lord!