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The Ducktator replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@to-whom-it-may-concern
If it’s okay, I’d like to add some characters. They’re all from the same WIP, but they don’t know each other.
Vyette
She’s an earth elemental. She is fairly tall, at 5′ 9”, and has medium brown skin, green eyes, and black braids streaked with green. Her father is the (rich) vice president, and she is an arrogant snob…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Super creepy, but interesting! Is this the entirety of the story, or is there going to be more? Either way, the mystery remains effective: if there’s more, than this is effective for piquing the reader’s interesting; if not, the questions it leaves unanswered are intriguing in and of themselves. I also liked your use of repetition.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
As a reader, is this a direction you would be satisfied to see the story take?
Yes
What do you think of the character development you see in this (specifically for Alan, Martha, Eric, and Cyrus)?
Seems solid.
Now that you’ve seen some more, what are your thoughts on the similarities between Eric and Kalmar?
I think it’s d…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I just found out there will be no more pennies.😭😭😭They were my favorite coin. RIP.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
As are 95% of the people in the roleplay, lol. You’d fit right in :]
Lol, okay. I think I will add a couple characters there.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
It looks great! This was a cool idea. I think you did a good job inserting a theme into such a tiny paragraph. Out of curiosity, how much do you have left in the word count?
Thanks!! Oh yes, that was so hard! I was going to keep it lighthearted and goofy, and then I was like, Hold on. And tried something a little different. 😛
Ummm… a…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
So, question. Is there an RP on here that I could randomly stuff some characters into, or is now not a good time?
Well, as @hybridlore alluded to, there is the character adventure RP. You would be totally welcome to join, although the it has been pretty much inactive recently. (Also, in case it would affect you, we do have a c…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Well, never mind. I forgot she was a fire elemental, so now I have to rewrite the whole scene anyway. *facepalm*
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I can’t get my character out of a burning building. Help?
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Character Name Help in the forum Characters 1 year, 2 months ago
I need to name 4 adults in their mid to late forties for a contemporary novel. Two men and two women. Any ideas?
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The Ducktator posted an update 1 year, 2 months ago
Tomorrow, February 9th, is my 9th anniversary of marriage to Rainbow, “Sherby”, Sherbet, my seven foot stuffed caterpillar.
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Esther replied to the topic The Purple Eyed | My Current WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
No worries!! :))
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Esther replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Lol! Frfr 🤣
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Esther replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
sounds great!! Tysm!!
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Esther replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
Thanks ladies!! I will definitely consider that!
Thank you!! Yes, I love it too!
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
Nice! I love that hymn!!!!!!
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Esther started the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
Hey guys! So I’m entering a little contest that one of my favorite magazines is doing. Basically they wanted me to finish the letter (they gave me like the first two lines) in under 250 words and they’d publish a few of the submissions they’ll receive in the next issue.
I need y’all to tear into this piece! Give me whatever feedback comes to mind…[Read more]
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