TheArcaneAxiom

@ellette-giselle

For some reason I thought of you IMMEDIATELY (probably because we’ve had so many conversations about slapping your writing on paper and NEVER GOING BACK (something that I struggle to not do since I’m a perfectionist lol))

It’s okay!!! I completely understand and I can’t even imagine how hard the past few weeks have been for…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ok! Yeah, again, do what you wanna do. But if you want some ideas or need a brainstorming partner just lmk!

I will!!! TYSM!!! 🙃

Yes I totally get it!! You definitely don’t have to go through and try to fix everything in the first draft 🥴

ahhhh hahaha yeah, I’d definitely get in trouble with @ellette-giselle if I did that…. (jk jk h…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Haha sounds familiar… I think I can put a real political event or name to almost everything you just mentioned!

Lol, same. Most of that wasn’t even intentional. I just decided that the government would be similar to ours, and things escalated from there. XD

@esther-c

Ohhhh my wordddd

Ok that actually makes so much sense. I felt like the story was moving too fast and wasn’t exactly sure how to slow it down.

Thanks for pointing that out!! <33

Glad I was able to help!!!!!

I do love your dialogue though…you’re so talented in that area!!! Just maybe breaking it up would help A LOT. Because too much o…[Read more]

@stephie

I feel like it totally depends on the situation.

Though, at least for me, something doesn’t feel right about saying “your religion is wrong and false.” Because that tends to get people defensive and push them away from Jesus. I feel way more comfortable with saying “I believe that there is only one God….(etc…)” and just sharing what…[Read more]

@stephie

It depends. I would say usually yes but fighting on the internet never convinces anyone, and sometimes it’s just best to be quiet. I also don’t think you should go up to someone who’s clearly of a different religion and randomly tell them off. But if it comes up in conversation or court or somewhere, absolutely.

@esther-c

In my first draft I actually never wrote a scene of their first study sesh together…do you think I should add that in for the second draft??

WHAT??? I was looking forward to reading that sooo bad!

@savannah_grace2009

Ohhhh my wordddd

Ok that actually makes so much sense. I felt like the story was moving too fast and wasn’t exactly sure how to slow it down.

Thanks for pointing that out!! <33

@grcr

Mmm. If that’s how other books do it, I guess it could work. I looked it up and some people say to extend the vowels and smooth con…

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@savannah_grace2009

Mmmm…that does make sense, I’m just not sure how to do that.

Instead of “hope”, my characters are trying to fix their problems themselves. Which might be a “false hope”, but I don’t really see it as hope. I understand what you mean, I’m just not exactly sure how to do that.

Ok! Yeah, again, do what you wanna do. But if you…[Read more]

@liberty

Nice board!

@anyone

I learned yesterday that we’re going to have a friend stay at our house all day next Saturday so I don’t think I’ll be able to join.

@whalekeeper

Normally everyone’s trying to kill each other with jokes.

That’s how my class works too. XD

@raxforge

Sure! I can’t RP until later though. School. 🙁

@anyone I’m going to send Celarent somewhere else.

Celarent

Celarent glanced uneasily at the janitor talking to the water elemental. He didn’t trust chaps with more limbs than considered normal. Not that he trusted anyone else either, but it would be too easy to pick pockets with hands like that. He summoned a gust of wind and flew down a nearby hallway.

thread, not forum :p

@artist-peoples-idk

Would anyone be interested in starting an art/illustration critique forum? Just curious, I think it might be fun, but I want to know if other people would want to before I create a new topic. Idk, just an idea. If nobody likes the idea that’s fine.

I can share more of what I had in mind if anyone would like.

@loopylin

Ryla

Ryla smiled gratefully at Liko. At least she would have one friend here. But there was another thing bothering her. “I’ve heard rumors of a dance. Is that mandatory?”

@ellette-giselle

This one notified me.

@ellette-giselle

No I didn’t. I’ve just been stalking that forum so I know what’s going on.