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FIREQUACKER changed their profile picture 2 years, 3 months ago
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Thank you!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 3 months ago
Okay. I’ve never heard of those before.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 3 months ago
That makes sense. I do think it would be better to either have more sci-fi elements or not mention them at all. As it is, it’s just enough to be confusing. I would imagine that if you did write this into a novella, it would fix the problem, since you would have more time for it to become clear.
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HighScribe replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 3 months ago
Ok 👍 makes sense. Yeah, I didn’t take it to mean you actually believed in extraterrestrial life.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 3 months ago
Beautiful! It would make a great novella.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Oh my goodness those character pics look awesome!!! *sneaks over to Copilot AI…*
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Esther replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 2 years, 3 months ago
Yes, that was cool to see 😊
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Oh yeah, I can imagine 😬
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Awww, so sadddd 😢
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 3 months ago
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 3 months ago
Thanks!
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 3 months ago
@theducktator @rae @freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009
Ahhh!!! I love all these moodboards so much!!! They look great y’all! ✨
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HighScribe replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 3 months ago
So, Estelle has a Bible, but this seems to take place in the same universe as all/most of your stories. So is your sci-fi universe supposed to be the same as our universe?
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HighScribe replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 3 months ago
I really like it, you did a really nice job!
Although I would bring up the same thing as Jonas, about the setting and stuff.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 3 months ago
Very nice, and I think it would work very well as a novella! The only thing I’m confused about is that it apparently takes place in a sci-fi world (since you mentioned other planets), but the setting seemed to be normal.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Thanks!
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 3 months ago
Oh, remembering old characters is so fun! “Sarcasm isn’t an attitude, it’s an art.” Love that quote.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
It’s beautiful.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 3 months ago
Thanks!
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