TheArcaneAxiom

@hybridlore

Once the others email me back, I’ll see if I have any more nagging questions or things that stump me that I might need your help with haha

I already have your email soooo I’ll just email you when I’m ready!!!

@ellette-giselle

*facepalm* Right.

@ellette-giselle

I was telling my (aspiring pilot) brother about this book and he brought up a good point. The US Air Force has trackers on all of their planes. Why would this government, with all its advanced technology, not have a way to track the Wraith?

@grcr

Oh no! Praying. 🩷

@kathleenramm

Pictures aren’t working again. 😭

I was going to share my thoughts, but then this thread would start to become redundant, lol! I pretty much agree with what everyone else has said. And as for the passage people keep referencing about food offered to idols and becoming a stumbling block, that’s 1 Corinthians 8.

@ellette-giselle

Hooray! Evan got a board! Some of the quotes on Jason’s remind me of my grandfather. He’s an engineer. XD I like Cassion already, though his Romanesque name in a dystopia is messing with my brain. XD With school, work, and dance starting, I likely won’t be as consistent with this book. You may get a week’s worth of comments each…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I listen to rock and metal sometimes

Someone made a heavy metal version of  The Pirates Who Don’t Do Anything. It’s awesome. XD

@theshadow

I don’t usually listen to rock, rap, (except Hamilton. I love Hamilton), or pop, but I LOVE jazz. (I’m listening to Frank Sinatra as I write this). I’d chalk this up with the food questions in w…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

No worries! I’ll pm you my email real fast :))

@esther-c

omcccc I’m so sorry I didn’t respond lol

Is it okay if we email about it? Where should I post mine?

@kathleenramm

KP’s been working recently. My concern is that I want a friend to join, but if there are no moderators, I don’t know how she’d get on.

I can ask a lawyer I know, but I’m pretty sure this isn’t his area of expertise…

@hybridlore @theducktator @shadow

Thank you ladies sooo much for the feedback!! It makes me even more excited to dive into the third draft! <33

They are all in a 50s ish red Cadillac with fins, so they’re pretty crammed. Ryla brings lots of cookies, and spends most of the trip looking out the window. Her grandfather drives. Celarent is in love with the car and keeps begging to drive it, but Ryla’s grandfather won’t let him. Iolyn is reading a thick book in the back. Letty is climbing on…[Read more]

@loopylin

I have a very vivid imagination, to the point that I don’t ever want my books made into a movie, because the characters wouldn’t look like I imagined them. I have this problem with other books made into movies too. Characters are more vivid in my mind than real people.

@loopylin

I do not. I can see vague impressions and shapes, and I can know what their individual physical attributes are, but I can’t put them together into a face in my mind. It’s weird. Idk if it’s normal either.

I can picture the faces of people I know, though.

@esther-c

Do you have any additional feedback after having read the whole thing?

What Sara said about adding in the other siblings a bit more. Most of them I couldn’t name or differentiate. Granted, I can barely keep track of my own siblings. XD

I loved Easton and Autumn! They’re so sweet and loving, and I can totally imagine them as grandparents…[Read more]