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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
No that’s not overwhelming me!!! <3
Actually that makes a lot of sense.
I have to think about that XD XD (and pray about it too!) because that would work really well!!!
Aww thanks for asking!
If you look at the Prayer Requests topic I posted about how I’m doing (sorry I’m tired and don’t feel like retyping all that lol)
But…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER started the topic Dystopian Worldbuilding in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@anyone
So I’m trying to write a dystopian novel. I have characters, some vague plot ideas, but no world. I need some sort of evil government, but everything I think of is either really lame, overly ridiculous, or 2020 on steroids. I’m honestly a terrible worldbuilder.😂 Any tips, whether on dystopian worlds, or just worldbuilding in general,…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years ago
Poor Nahim. Imagine being a tomato…ugh.😂 I don’t like tomatoes. What do you usually eat for breakfast?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
Sef and Lilitu are adorable, dandelions are beautiful, and Eloy is way better than Cassian. AND YOU INCLUDED THE TOAD. OH MY GOODNESS!!!!!! I’M SO HAPPY!!!!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
This one’s for you.
@anyone-else I know this scene isn’t my best, but I’m super tired and brain-dead…and I just felt like writing something XD
Chapter 15
Sef held Hanna tight to her chest.
Please be quiet, she silently pleaded, rocking back and forth.
A waft of the rancid odor escaped through the secret door overhead, and Sef…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
Thanks for reading it!!!!!!! <3
Idk if I’d call it a resistance, but all I can say is that light always prevails over darkness!!!!!!!!!
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FIREQUACKER posted an update 2 years ago
Sometimes I pretend to myself that I have insomnia. What I really have is a good book and inadequate respect for tomorrow.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
@highscribeofatherium
hahaha you’re good!!!
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Sister: “What’s a cheese monger?”
Me: “It’s like a haberdasher, but with cheese instead of hats.”
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
Ouch. 😂
At first I didn’t like Eloy either…but I felt bad for him so now I do XD
It’s hard to dislike characters I feel bad for.
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HighScribe replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
@savannah_grace2009
Oh…*looks back*
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years ago
@highscribeofaetherium @esther-c
Thanks guys <333
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
He didn’t get it sloshed over him–it was much worse and more painful, I’m afraid.
he tried to eat it when it was wayyyyyyyyyy too hot XD XD
should I make this clearer?
At first I didn’t like Eloy either…but I felt bad for him so now I do XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
My fantasy isn’t a typical fantasy.
It’s combining medieval times with our modern world. So there are cars like we have, and pistols, and other things you’ll see later.
The rules for my world are…there are no rules.
I’m not even sure if this works or not (the author I’m getting feedback from said that they can be combined…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
How do you know this?😂
😐
It may have happened once or twice…
Poor guy’s family keeps forgetting he exists. Maybe he’d be in a better mood if people actually cared about him.
He seems like the kind of guy who’d be a grump anyway.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
 Poor Lilitu, though XD getting hot soup sloshed over you is no fun.
How do you know this?😂
I still don’t like Eloy, he’s a grump.
Poor guy’s family keeps forgetting he exists. Maybe he’d be in a better mood if people actually cared about him.
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Esther replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Thanks for reminding me! I’ll have it out this week!
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hahaha I wish I knew you in real life!!! I need someone to make me laugh XD XD
💙💙💙 KP ought to have an annual conference so we can meet in real life.
We could all show up to @freed_and_redeemed ‘s book signing…😲😱
…and then you would all learn how dreadfully BORING I am in person!
(but really, it would be amazing to meet some of y’all!)
SOME, lol, that makes it sound like I meant it would NOT be amazing to meet others of you lol XD
…and you’d learn how AWKWARD I am irl!!!!!!!! don’t worry, we can be boring together, lol 🤣
We should start a topic for planning our KP conference…just for funzies even if it never happens…and tag Kathleen!!! WE COULD EMAIL HER!😱
We can be the awkward queens 😎👑
Email her about what?
Yesss slayyy!
About if it would be possible to organize a KP con or if we’d have to do it ourselves.
Ahh ok.