TheArcaneAxiom

@ellette-giselle

You don’t have to answer anything I said…we can be done lol

I swear I wasn’t trying to argue…

Sara just gets confused and carried away sometimes so I’m sorry :/

@keilah-h

Yeah, I know.

That’s why I think we’re kind of done XD XD I did NOT mean for this to get blown up like this…

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h

WHOA WHOA WHOA I DID NOT MEAN TO START A FIGHT.

Yeah that’s what I’m feeling too…XD I feel like actually horrible :/

but it’s Ellette’s story, and she can do whatever she wants.

I second that.

I wasn’t attacking your story or telling you you should change it…I just wanted to discuss this  a little bit because I love…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’m not in any way trying to get you to believe how I believe! You don’t have to accept anything we’re saying…and I’m sorry if I made you feel that way. I think me and Whaley just like talking about stuff like this and we just saw this as an interesting topic to discuss.

It’s okay if you want to end it and I’m not going to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Whether or not the marriage lasts, it’s important to have a healthy relationship with your partner. If the marriage lasts but it is a bad relationship, I would say it was a bad decision to get married.

Yes! I feel the same way!

It is possible to have a healthy marriage at a young age. You can do it. It is just hard to have a good o…

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@ellette-giselle

well I’ve read a TON of books about Christian marriages and Biblical courtship/dating and I have never read that! Plus, I have witnessed a TON of beautiful marriages that started very young and have gone on for years!

Okay. I’m sorry if I’ve offended you! I’m just telling you my perspective.

I’m not saying that ALL young m…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I’ll do a character after Min. 🙂

@ellette-giselle

Okay okay okay

Nevermind

XD

That’s just my personal opinion lol. I’m not saying you should do that, I was just saying how I feel. I don’t know…I just really really hate the idea of people getting married young, and I’m not sure why. So you do what you want with your story! See, this is why I need to stop looking at your book…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Oh my goodness, that looks so good!!!

Psstt, @freed_and_redeemed … 👆

@rae

I would if I could! But life is pretty busy right now and since sci-fi’s not my genre, I don’t really feel qualified to give good feedback. 😅

I know I said I was going to leave, but I’m just bored lol!

also, one little issue I have: maybe wait till Sabina’s at least 18? I’m 17 and I wouldn’t marry a guy now even if I knew him very well. My mom got married at 17 but I was under the impression she was the exception.

I agree with Keilah.

I know your story is set in medieval times, so th…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Why do you think Aragorn wasn’t intended as a Christ figure? I don’t mean that JRRT meant Aragorn specifically to represent Christ or anything, but I think in some ways he was definitely intended to be a Christ figure.

(and I hope y’all don’t mind me jumping in here :p)

@rae

I can say, with a 100% certainty that Aragorn was NOT meant as an sorta Jesus figure, or to represent anything in Christ.

Really? Does a character have to be perfect to be a Christ figure?

@freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theshadow @grcr @esther-c

I don’t know if there’s an armory in this place, so I just added one.

Ayla

I rubbed my eyes blearily. Had I fallen out of bed? I put my hand on the ground. It was…stone? I leapt to my feet. “Wow.”  Sun shone through a high circular window, glinting off of what appeared to b…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I have no idea. I just found it.

@whalekeeper

So are you strengthening your core to increase your balance in jiu-jitsu or for other reasons? Cuz I’m a volleyball player and have some really good reps for balance… 😏 (only a few core exercises tho)

@rae

I’m not very good at critiquing (at all) but I can still read them and give any feedback I can. Sometime. Probably not today ’cause I have work.

@whalekeeper

This is hilarious, which feels a bit mean to say, since I’m not the one doing planks, but it is.

But really this is kind of a good idea XD