TheArcaneAxiom

@ellette-giselle

Ok….Werner looks like he’d be a favorite character of mine… 🤭 Lmk if you post any snippets of him!!

@savannah_grace2009

Oooh, I like it!! My only critique is the first half of the chapter…. It was great until I found out Sef was only 4 at this point. It just felt a little too complex to be coming from a 4 year old, ya know? Maybe simplify it somehow? Keep the same emotions that Sef is feeling, but see if you can bring it down to a 4 year o…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Why thank you 😎

🫡

😁

@freed_and_redeemed

Ooohhhh, interesting….👀

@the_lost-journal

This looks interesting! I can’t promise I’ll be able to keep up, but I might just stalk the topic. We’ll see!

@anyone-who-is-interested

Chapter 1

Strong hands grabbed at her shoulders, trying to rip her away.

But Sef wouldn’t let go.

Eyes scrunched shut, tears leaking from the corners, she clung to her father like he was the only thing keeping her life together.

In a way, he was.

And now he was leaving.

“Let go, Sef,” her mother said stern…

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@ellette-giselle

AUGH!

I’VE BEEN WOUNDED.

*rolls on the ground in agony*

@hybridlore💨⚪ @rae 💨⚪

@linus-smallprint

Crystalized was pretty bad, but I don’t think Dragons Rising is very good, either. I could rant about it, but I’m not going to because nobody wants that :p

I’ll just say the thing that bothers me the most about it is the way they’re trampling over all the lore they’ve already established. The stuff they’re introducing just…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

There are a lot of teens/adults who still follow the show from their childhood.

Yeah, that’s pretty much why I still watch it. Nostalgia, plus to cringe at the recent seasons :p

But maybe we should take this conversation elsewhere before Ducktator kicks us off.

Lol perhaps.

@whalekeeper

Oh, yes, my brothers and I, we got so. many. Ninjago. LEGOs.

But we took them all apart now for pieces (and because you literally couldn’t walk on our basement flood) so we have, like, fifty ninja heads lying around. Lol.

@whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

I didn’t even realize other teenagers/adults even liked that show 😂

@the_lost-journal

(Oh my gosh, I was about to use the middle finger emoji to point up 😭 I am so stupid lol! I never EVER use that emoji and I wasn’t looking so I clicked it and then quickly deleted it 😭😭😭😭)

Oh my goodness 😨😱 that is, like, my worst fear. I’m extremely paranoid that either I’ll do something like that on accident, or autocorrect w…[Read more]

Sorry, @the_lost-journal messed up your tag in my post 👆

@the_lost_journal

You guys didn’t even know I was taking a break from KP!

I kind of knew, I saw you hadn’t been very active recently, but I wasn’t sure if it was an ‘official’ break, or if you were just busy. Anyway, glad you’re back 🙂

I love this idea! I think I’ll join, depending on how fast this moves. December is pretty busy for me so i…[Read more]

@theducktator

I agree with what hybrid and highscribe said. Definitely consider the length and genre of your book first. If your novel is only going to be 60-70k, I would definitely hesitate adding more POV characters cuz then they each only get 10-15k each and that’s really not a lot in the big scheme of things.

Also consider if each c…[Read more]

@grcr

Oh no, my prayers will definitely be with you and your family. 🙏🏻 Sending virtual hugs your way! 🫂💕

“fear not, for I am with you; be not dismayed, for I am your God; I will strengthen you, I will help you, I will uphold you with my righteous right hand.”
‭‭Isaiah‬ ‭41‬:‭10‬ ‭

“I sought the Lord, and he answered me and delivered me from…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

How interactive is this? It sounds like a lot of fun, but I’m unavailable most of this weekend.

@Esther-c

*Gets hit in the face by a particularly cold snowball* *Sputters*

Gee thanks Esther 🙄😂😂

“Ty?” I shouted as I walked down the sandy boardwalk by the beach. No answer.

Continuing down the familiar path, I savor the taste of the salt in the air and the lovely sea breeze gently caressing my face, my wavy hair tossing in the win…[Read more]

@grcr

Praying for you and your family <3