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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Pronunciation: Otto-line (Otto as in the name otto plus line)
That’s funny, I’ve been pronouncing it that way, but I never thought that it might be pronounced differently. The way it’s spelled it could easily be pronounced “ot-ol-in-ay” or something like that although that would be pretty silly!
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Kads replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
thus i will not be updating my account with my new interests and life things and whatnot. you all will simply have to deal with the fact that this account is a travesty to who i really am 😎🤠
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Kads replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
but please nobody expect me to make a return i am far too busy with life 😭
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Kads replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
me realizing the last time i was on here was when i was twelve
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Kads posted an update 2 years, 11 months ago
i think im officially too OG to know anybody here with the exception of linyang and i am far too busy to revive my account at this point HAHA
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
From what I have seen, I’m thinking Ellis might not like him, but we’ll have to wait till he actually shows up to interact with them.
Ellis doesn’t like anyone, lol XD
(except guys that have cool swords. Even then, there’s a chance he’ll hate you)
(just kidding.)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Pronunciation: Otto-line (Otto as in the name otto plus line)
Ottoline
“Are you chilled?” He asked.
“I-I-” she began. She desperately wanted to run, but her feet might as well have been useless bricks.
“She’s alright,” a familiar voice spoke from next to her. Hugo. “She’s just a little on edge.” Ottoline managed to smile at him g…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ottoline
Oh no.
The man approached, sword at his side. She shrank back, looking frantically for Hugo. Her heart beat faster with panic as she saw Hugo talking to Kari and Hedieh and Amir across the room.
She froze.
“Hello, my name is Lord Nahim,” he said.
Oh no. Ellis probably sent him to kill me because he’s too much of a…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Flaz hijacked Ellis’s conversation with Kaine, but feel free to have him jump in whenever.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Okay. I’ll have to soon.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Idk. I didn’t get a super good feel for him yet, so we’ll have to wait and see. From what I have seen, I’m thinking Ellis might not like him, but we’ll have to wait till he actually shows up to interact with them.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Interesting. Yeah, she comes across almost as a psychopath some of the time, but in her POVs, we see that’s she does have some misgivings about what she’s doing, and we see her reasons for doing it. I’m not sure if many of the characters will ever understand or sympathize with her though.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ellis
Ellis had no idea what this guy was talking about. And I thought Ottoline and Zahlin were bad, thought Ellis, this is worse by far.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I think that the characters should be able to survive, unless they’re fighting an entire army of dragons or something, lol. They have multiple weapons that should be able to kill dragons fairly effectively, so if things get too serious, we can sort of cheat them out, I guess? I don’t think having soldiers would be very good solution, because…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Yes. She mainly strikes me as being naive and not particularly considerate of others. I’ve been wondering if you intended to portray her in such a negative light or not. She definitely turned into a very interesting character.
Ellis
Ellis couldn’t tell whether this guy was joking or not. He didn’t no what else to say, so he said…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Oh, so will there be “NPCs” on the journey? That seems like that would be a bit awkward, but if other people want that, I’m fine. I thought that the people of Lillen weren’t well trained though. I was thinking it would be fun if the characters who know how to fight had to train the others, but whatever.
I’ve been imagining random other…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ellis
Before Kaine could respond, a loud voice interrupted. “That’s quite a strange name,” said the person sitting on Kaine’s left, “do you have siblings with strange names too?”
“I wasn’t talking to you,” snapped Ellis, “And there’s nothing weird about my name. I suspect it’s wherever you come from that has weird names.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, they’re at a table. I don’t know if they’re eating yet, but probably, because Ellis and Nahim had enough time to go follow Zahlin down a hall, get in a fight with him, and come back, so I would think they’re eating. Unless their hosts are just terrible and are keeping everyone waiting for like fifteen minutes, lol!
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