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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Oh no. What’s he doing?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Kate
Kate compressed the Arclash again and infused it into a gemstone again as Ellis and Nora pinned Nahim down.
Ellis panted hard. “Now,” he said. “Somebody get me that rope!”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ellis
Nahim kicked Ellis in the leg. Ellis dropped down to one knee but kept hold of Nahim’s arm. He aimed a Conviction-empowered kick at Nahim’s leg, knocking it out from under him. At the same time, Kate pulled on the Arclash, and Nahim stumbled forward.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Seriously, guys, I leave for like, twenty minutes and Nahim is threatening to turn people into Swiss cheese again??
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I think they’ve got this… sort of, although I would think Nora would probably get involved if it’s escalated to the level of brandishing guns.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Kate
Oops, thought Kate. It seemed she had just made things worse.
Kate pulled on the Arclash, throwing Nahim off balance so he couldn’t shoot anyone. Ellis ran in and grabbed Nahim’s free hand, trying to wrestle the gun away.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ellis
“That wasn’t an option,” said Ellis. “Someone. Get me. A rope! Now!”
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Kate
Nobody seemed to be getting a rope. Kate sighed, reaching for a gemstone at her belt. She crushed it. A glowing red string emerged, expanding. An Arclash. Practically unbreakable, and if it was broken, it would explode. It would, however, eventually…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I’m assuming Fennin is not in here right now, right?
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
NAAAAHIIIIIIMMMMMMM JUST LISTEN TO REASON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I’m good either way!
I guess I’ll just do it right now though since I have time
EZRIAN
“So, if this isn’t one of his jokes, where are we? Are we still on Alick? Are we still even in the Wond Galaxy?””
Ezrian stared at the young man, mulling over the foreign words. The context made it sound as though they…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I’ve missed our boys so muuuuchhh 😭😭😭❤️
ZYRIN
He wrapped his arms around himself. It was getting darker, making the halls around them seem more ominous and foreboding.
Zyrin glanced over at Dylan, walking beside him. They seem to have somehow lost Jocelyn and the furry little scowl creature. And it made him a little worried…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Is your turn to RP or is it mine? I don’t remember 😅
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ellis
“You’ll do it now,” said Ellis. “Where’s that rope!”
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I’ve got to go, but I might be back on in a half hour or so.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ellis
Ellis did a facepalm.
“Nahim, you are going to rest and that is final. You just get to decide to do it voluntarily…or not.”
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Zahlin
Zahlin snapped his Sword back into its sheath. “If this goes too far,” He said, “I will intervene.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ellis
“Nahim, you are making no sense.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ellis
Ellis sighed in exasperation.
“You drew your sword first. You can still put it away.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ellis
Ellis scratched his head, confused.
“You literally just drew your sword.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ellis
That was far enough. Ellis drew his own sword, which burned green.
“Nahim, put. The sword. Away. This is for your own good.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Note on dialogue grammar:
“Probably.” Zahlin said, drawing the blade. “Nahim, put that sword down now. I’m not asking twice.”
You want a comma after ‘probably’: “Probably,” Zahlin said…
The ‘probably’ is connected to ‘Zahlin said.’ You do want a period after ‘Zahlin said, drawing the blade.’ like you put. Just a habit y…[Read more]
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