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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I’ve missed our boys so muuuuchhh 😭😭😭❤️
ZYRIN
He wrapped his arms around himself. It was getting darker, making the halls around them seem more ominous and foreboding.
Zyrin glanced over at Dylan, walking beside him. They seem to have somehow lost Jocelyn and the furry little scowl creature. And it made him a little worried…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Is your turn to RP or is it mine? I don’t remember 😅
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ellis
“You’ll do it now,” said Ellis. “Where’s that rope!”
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I’ve got to go, but I might be back on in a half hour or so.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ellis
Ellis did a facepalm.
“Nahim, you are going to rest and that is final. You just get to decide to do it voluntarily…or not.”
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Zahlin
Zahlin snapped his Sword back into its sheath. “If this goes too far,” He said, “I will intervene.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ellis
“Nahim, you are making no sense.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ellis
Ellis sighed in exasperation.
“You drew your sword first. You can still put it away.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ellis
Ellis scratched his head, confused.
“You literally just drew your sword.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ellis
That was far enough. Ellis drew his own sword, which burned green.
“Nahim, put. The sword. Away. This is for your own good.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Note on dialogue grammar:
“Probably.” Zahlin said, drawing the blade. “Nahim, put that sword down now. I’m not asking twice.”
You want a comma after ‘probably’: “Probably,” Zahlin said…
The ‘probably’ is connected to ‘Zahlin said.’ You do want a period after ‘Zahlin said, drawing the blade.’ like you put. Just a habit y…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
JOIN THE #MAKENAHIMTAKEABREAK SOCIETY DO NOT RESIST.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Zahlin
Maybe we should do something…? The Sword suggested.
“Probably.” Zahlin said, drawing the blade. “Nahim, put that sword down now. I’m not asking twice.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ellis
“That doesn’t seem like a very good life approach. Is that why you’ve almost died so many times?”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ellis
“No!” snapped Ellis. “It’s ridiculous that you want to fight over this!”
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
JOIN USSSSSSSS…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ellis
Nahim’s hand went to his sword.
“Nahim, this is ridiculous!” shouted Ellis.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ellis
Ellis sighed. “Someone, get a rope!”
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
JOIN THE #MAKENAHIMTAKEABREAK SOCIETY!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Zahlin may decide it would be a good idea to join in XD
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
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