TheArcaneAxiom

Who’s going next? I went last, so I can’t go again…

@vinagirl

https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ

That’s the link to my book 🙂

@jonas

I know it’s baking soda…I don’t live under a rock, contrary to what everyone in my school thinks haha! It just reminds me of it…

But soft drinks sounds….weirder.

@vinagirl

YOU HOARD CHICKENS TOOOOO?!?? We have like 80 chickens 🤣 how many do you have? I am very curious now.

I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I h…[Read more]

@rae

Oh okay. Maybe make that more obvious somehow. You could spell in speedearing, which looks more distinct. It’s easy to not notice when the only difference is the repetition of a letter.

@esther-c

wonder if Lukas was coming to the dance or not, but he shrugged it off. He’d ask him later.

lol! I can’t wait for that awkward RP…lol

hey…what if Lukas and Liv were partners? Fynn would never stop laughing….lol

Livia

“How do you dance, anyway?” she asked, laughing a little at her own ignorance. “I don’t know a thing about it. A…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

That’s baking soda. How’s this, we all start calling them “soft drinks” then we can stop arguing.

@rae

The only thing I noticed was this:

“Nahim, I still think you should have joined the speeder races. Your speedering is excellent.”

“My brother’s speedeering was exquisite.” A small point was made on the last word.

“Speedeering? What kinda of a word is that?”

Mandin used “speedering” first, but then he calls Nahim out on the word when he uses it.

@highscribeofaetherium @calyhuge

Thanks guys!!

will miss the only character who’s more insane than me 😢😞

lol!!!

@jonas

*gasp*

I don’t know whether to be insulted, or….too late, I’m insulted 😂😂😂

(soda just sounds like a white powder you’d put in a cake, not something you should drink…lol)

@savannah_grace2009

I never said you were the only one, you’re just wrong 😆

@rae

I LOVE how you described Wyoh….lolol!

@vinagirl

It is (in my humble opinion) pop.

YESSS. ThAnK yOu!!

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium

SEE? I’m not the only one!!!

@vinagirl

Hey there! I’m Sara, sometimes called Savannah by my readers (my pen name is Savannah Grace). I’ve never published a book before but I’m trying to get there!

I’m a freshman in high school and attend a public school (WHY am I the only one on KP that doesn’t homeschool??). I used to homeschool, but then transferred because God said that…[Read more]

@hybridlore

🙂 Im not sure how else to describe it. Gold seems to fits it perfectly. Neither blond or brown.

As far as personalities go, I think most of my characters are often a lot like me in some ways, but then polar opposite in others. I think it’s easier to write characters that are very much like you and characters that are not like you at all than any shade in between that.

@hybridlore

I try to write a ton of different characters. Mainly all are extroverted like me. My main character in my current WIP though, is an introvert  and I thought it would be a slight challenge and fun to do a different personality than my own. I have another character (as a few of you know) Hugo, he is slightly bad, but still good. I  b…[Read more]

@jonas

Ah

It’s a z not an s

I think I butchered that spelling.

@highscribeofaetherium @grcr

Those people didn’t choose to have brown eyes, and if they had a choice, I doubt many people would pick to.