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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Guys…sorry I know this is kind of a long segment…so just ignore this if you don’t have time!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
And then a bad guy POV….
SPOILER ALERT–Iver’s actually not real-real. He’s actually a Pythonos in disguise. Pythonos that use Dark Magick to take the form of other people are called Weavers. Anyways…
The Weaver awoke from his drunken state and beheld his disheveled apartment.
He closed his eyes and listened for the thrum of the girl’s h…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @hybridlore @acancello @esther-c @scoutfinch180
Okay…part TWO of the sad scene…
Lilitu walked briskly down the dimly lit streets, Sef’s emaciated form in his arms.
Though his foot pained him, he could barely feel it now.
His body thrummed with adrenaline.
She was so weightless….his stomach turned. He could feel every bon…
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum Roleplays 2 years, 9 months ago
Sounds good to me!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
They’re similar to lightsabers but way cooler because they’re shaped like swords instead of sticks.
I found that really funny for some reason XD
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum Roleplays 2 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, I think it also leaves it open ended enough that we could choose to do something else later if we wanted.
@rae @highscribeofaetherium @princesachronicle22 @beth-torres @keilah-h (is that everyone? Our numbers sure have dwindled.)
Is everyone good with that? I kind of feel that we should just start, because we need to…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum Roleplays 2 years, 9 months ago
@jonas @anyone
What about this idea: Lillen is under siege. The characters will be given tasks that require them to move around the city doing various things. That way we can just kind of make things up for them to do on the fly and we don’t have to decide too much up front.
I like that idea, I think it’ll be good to have the characters occupied w…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I just created Scandium’s power: Manifestation.
This allows the piece of Scandium to pull magic energy into a physical form attached to the Scandium. It appears as a glowing white substance with a slight orange-yellow tint. The shape is set permanently after it is manifested the first time. These are used for swords, which are called S…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Okay!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Livia
She smiled as if to reassure him, unsure of what to say.
And then she felt a familiar warmth on the back of her neck.
“Xandro!” she turned around, letting go of Lukas’s hand and hugging Xandro’s neck. He snorted.
“I know, I know, I may have forgotten about you…” she hung her head guiltily. Xandro grabbed Lukas by the…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Hmm… it does seem like a lot, but idk. I don’t really have any comments rn, except ‘cool’. XD
(I’m very helpful, am I not? *sarcasm*)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
I know…he makes me SO MAD!!!
You can give her hot cocoa and blankets…she needs it…😭😭😭
Don’t worry…Lilitu’s rescuing her <333
OH MY GOODNESS YOU PUT LEFSE IN YOUR SIGNATURE!!!! That means so much to me!
Thanks for reading it <33
I wrote it in English at school (we weren’t doing anything and had free time) and was…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Oh my, I just discovered that Technetium is radioactive. (I guess I sort of knew that, but I didn’t think about it.) That should be interesting to play with. I haven’t decided what power it will have, but it would be interesting for the users to have to worry about getting radiated (although I’m not sure how dangerous it actually is.) Technetium…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Thinking about this a bit more, I’m a bit dissatisfied with the ‘mental’ category of powers. I haven’t been able to think of anything cool to do with these, which is especially disappointing because I’m partial to some of the second row metals like Yttrium, Palladium, and Silver. (And then there are also those silly sounding ones like Molybdenum…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 (you might have to call the protection squad on this one….) @hybridlore @acancello @esther-c @scoutfinch180
Here’s a chapter I just wrote…I’m pretty happy with it but it’s SO SAD!!!
“Sef!”
She heard the door crash open upstairs, and her heart plummeted to the soles of her feet.
It was late.
Very late.
The odds that Ive…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium
So, there’s a magic system I’ve been struggling with for a while, and I think I’ve finally got the basic organization of it down, although there’s a lot left to fill in.
It utilizes the first 29 transition metals on the periodic table (the last row are all synthetic. Besides, they have terrible names.)…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Aww, so sweet!!
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Oh my goodness, yess, they are adorable!! And—at least the oldest two—look so much like their parents!
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Why did you have to make is so saddd?! 😭
(That’s such a rhetorical question. XD)
Yeah, I think the pictures went to the music well and I didn’t mind the repetition. I think the only thing that wasn’t the best was the color of the words. I liked the font, but I felt like with some of pictures it was hard to read.
But that’s all. And whe…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
It just occurred to me that they’ve known each other for less than a day…. 😐 😂
Lukas
He tried to make his laugh sound casual, only succeeding in a voice crack— again. He cleared his throat and steadied himself. “Yeah…”
I’m not sure how to make Xandro find them, so you can do that if you want.
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