TheAcornman

thank thee @catwing

@seekjustice confetti and glitter 😀 I’ll be back in a few minutes….

@xonos-darkgrate I agree, that was really well done. Very good at drawing the reader in, too. And I love the beginning quote by the Jake of Jacks guy.

I have a few things to point out, but they’re mostly just structural/punctuation stuff. The first paragraph, after it says The City of Cards, is mixing past and present tense. I can see how it…[Read more]

anybody got any good music recc. I’ve got a country song stuck in my head…..

@rolena-hatfield No problem. I don’t really want to leave this lovely place….
@aratrea I was wondering if I should’ve asked you.

@catwing I am hear!!! @seekjustice good news, good news!!! I’m hear everyone *I’m really happy because our internet is now working and someone is here!!!!*

@the-real-kapeefer Dude? Seriously? Don’t do that to me again. I wrote a page long rant on why not to use the message bible because of you. 😛
Ah well. I was able to apply my biblical doctrine class to all this, sooo…

And can I please point out that one verse.

John 1:14 rewrite : “The word became flesh and blood and moved into the neighborhood.”
XD

@amy-l-klob ohhhhh… I like that

I feel like I’m an excited puppy bouncing from scene to scene, my brain storming leaving messes of scattered research notes and ideas across paper and computer hard drive.

It is so acurate. 🙂

@aratrea oh good grief… lol 🙂 thanks for telling us……
@the-real-kapeefer ………. What are we going to do with you?? 😛 😉 Yes like @jess-penrose my previous note was out of genuine concern. 🙂
@rolena-hatfield Okay that’s what I thought but I wanted to check.

@winter-rose thank you 🙂 Y’all can’t even imagine how encouraging and how much my stress just melts away having people who are technically strangers praying and saying such nice things. *melts into a puddle of happy tears*

@epicaddie2 oh yes I will def. pray.

@daeus Got it. (Hear that @kate-flournoy? Lemme know when the book’s launched.)

@xonos-darkgrate Oh sorry, yup, that’s basically what I meant. Are you male or female. 😛 So you’re the first INTJ/Architect (dominantly at least) guy on this forum as far as I know. That’s real cool.

Aha, gotcha.

@daeus Welp, I’d like to read it again eventually (probably sometime after it’s published and we have it…physical books are so much better. No computer screen headaches.), but I think I can go off of the last version I read for the review if that’s fine with you.
In which case, when and where do I do the review?

@amy-l-klob Ahhhhh!!!! I’m writing a story Revolutionary War right now… well kinda…

@the-real-kapeefer please be not serious, (Please know I’m lovingly pointing this out as a sister in Christ). The message is paraphrases, I also wanted to say I would take any writing from Mr. Peterson with a very large pinch of salt, it is his interpretation of the Bible, versus a language translation.
As I do not want to break rules, cause…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper *draws pen sword* I am going to try and slay my uninspiration and get threw an extremely boring chapter…..

@joy-schmidt Hey! Another thing I just thought of today… you know how you like to be satisfied, and how finishing the planning does that for you. Well, my ultimate satisfaction from writing is word count. I’ve been keeping a journal of how many words I’ve written for each of my writing sessions, and keeping track of how many words a day I write…[Read more]

@the-real-kapeefer
“The Message is not a translation, nor can it strictly be said to be a paraphrase of the original languages of the Bible.” gotquestions.org

Before I go on a rant of my opinions of the Message bible… @rolena-hatfield Does it go against the forum rules to talk about this? Rule one, to be exact? I just want to make sure…