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whaley replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 2 hours, 22 minutes ago
I love how both of those sentences are probably super accurate. Now I want to know why Fel wants to get rid of the robots.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 hours, 26 minutes ago
Hehe, let me do it for you. *Boops him* *He doesn’t react* :]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 hours, 28 minutes ago
This is a weird question to ask, but does anybody want to interview Marcel? I’m feeling icky and can’t think straight enough for the roleplays. I don’t know, just want something cheerful to do. @loopylin @rae @godlyfantasy12 @savannah_grace2009
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 hours, 19 minutes ago
Nooooo! I am losing my only guy feedback person! 😱
I understand that though.
A World War II spy story!
Funny you say that….. I currently am writing a WWII spy story. F.O.S. But no, this is not WWII.
I plan on starting asap if I’m to get two books rewritten, edited, formatted, and printed by…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 hours, 24 minutes ago
That would be lovely, if you please
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 14 hours, 52 minutes ago
Really?! Ah yay!!!
Wait, you think it needs to be published?! Woah!
Okay, so you’re saying you’ll only give feedback in email, not KP? Or did I misunderstand that completely?
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 15 hours, 5 minutes ago
Boom, finally caught up
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 17 hours, 3 minutes ago
I should have been clearer. XD I was talking about this chapter but also recent events in the book. One of the last chapters had this:
“Thisss one, Iver?” he slapped his knee, shaking his head. “You sssay your power comesss from this weakling?”
Iver stared at him. “She isss not as weak as she appearsss.”
Sef blinked hard.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 17 hours, 5 minutes ago
Okay…… I put yes…. but that honestly depends on what kind of time I have. I may have to drop back to feedback…. or nothing.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 18 hours, 10 minutes ago
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whaley started the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 day, 6 hours ago
Summarize your story in one weird sentence!
It needs to be both accurate and strange at the same time! This is just for fun; I don’t recommend you put this summary on the back of your book. But it takes a dose of creativity.Here’s an example with Lord of the Rings (the summaries can be longer than this): A guy with hairy feet can’t let go of hi…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 6 hours ago
My beautiful baby and his beautiful snoot
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 7 hours ago
I like it! I like how you’re beginning to integrate action on Sef’s part. I definitely want to see an explanation for why she is stronger than other people the pythonos use. I’d guess her strength comes from hope, but she doesn’t seem to have any up until this point.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 7 hours ago
Oh, I write all of the above plus some. idk. The MC is a teenage guy in most of it, but then so were Joseph and Aaron. 🤷🏼♀️
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 7 hours ago
@ellette-giselle lol
I was thinking maybe it’s like an adventure story or a war story and they’re all excited about that. Your other ones from what I can tell are more missionary, persecution, or godly-romance stories, and most boys I know of aren’t super into that, especially the last one. But I don’t know.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 7 hours ago
Aw thank you so much!!! I can’t wait. Yay! One member has joined the team!
What do your brothers love so much about it?
I hope you can discover that, because I don’t know…………
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 8 hours ago
What do your brothers love so much about it?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 8 hours ago
@Ellette-giselle I will at least be there to give spelling and grammar advice. I wouldn’t pass up another great book from you!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 8 hours ago
Thank you, thank you, thank you very much. *twirls hat dramatically because for some reason that is the mental image I have* Feedback like this is always super helpful.
In answer to Hybrid’s question, this book is about the length of the first one with the middle two being the longest. I just submitted really bi…[Read more]
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