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Active 5 years ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Prose in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
Doh! *grimace* Thanks for pointing that out, @Jadamae. I get those two mixed up ALL THE TIME. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Prose in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
That works. I can do that.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Prose in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
@Daeus I agree. One hundred percent. Always live in the moment. Otherwise it pushes the reader off to arms’ length.
Actually you know, I just realized something… the classical authors don’t do that as much. Live in the moment, I mean. Okay, I take that back. They do— but they are forever interrupting their ‘moments’ with flashbacks and info…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Prose in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
Hm, yes. I wouldn’t say it’s a requirement for a great writer to be a philosopher, but it certainly comes easier. Heh, just plain ol’ writing comes easier!
Why? Here’s my hypothesis: Writing is a reflection of life. The clearer your understanding of life, the clearer a reflection you are able to reproduce. And thus, the purpose of books is also…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Prose in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
Okay… I think I get you @Daeus. If this discussions proceeds and we’re still not on the same page, holler and we’ll try and get it straightened out. 😀
My theory is that it is mostly due to with the organic suffusion of philosophy throughout the book.
This is deep. Pardon me while I go off to my secretest of secret writer hideaways and ponder…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
Hm… I really like The Fire Ships. There are twelve episodes, I’m pretty sure— all roughly an hour and 45 minutes. It’s been a while since I last saw them, but as I recall The Fire Ships is pretty clean. All the others are running together in my mind, so I can’t remember which ones needed screening and which were fine… but overall the stuff…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Prose in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
@Daeus ha! I like that one. 😀
Oh, and as for the foundation stuff, I simply meant you have to understand how to write readable prose before you tackle re-readable. Perhaps I misunderstood your first post and that’s not what you were saying??
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Prose in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
@Faithdk yes!! When it comes to adjectives, less generally is more. I used to be absolutely enamored with adjectives— just see my ‘Story of the Seed’ story that was published on KP a while back. *shudder* 😛
But I’ve learned that if I use them sparingly, they’re more effective when they come.
And yes. I don’t like apple pie.I’m afraid it’s…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy started the topic Prose in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
Hello again, lovely fellow KeePers. Seems like I haven’t talked to you in ages. I’ve been a bit busy lately. 😉
But not too busy to think about writing. I’m always thinking about some aspect of it or another. And the latest subject of my scrutiny has been prose. The actual words themselves.
This is vastly important.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
@Sarah-H hmm… it depends. I’ve seen them too, and love them, and as far as violence goes if your brother’s seen Master and Commander he can see HH, but I’m seventeen and there are parts my parents skip when they watch it with me for other reasons. We actually skip one whole episode— The Duchess… something or other, and fragments of the rest.…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
@Sarah-H hmm… it depends. I’ve seen them too, and love them, and as far as violence goes if your brother’s seen Master and Commander he can see HH, but I’m seventeen and there are parts my parents skip when they watch it with me for other reasons. We actually skip one whole episode— The Duchess… something or other, and fragments of the rest.…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favorites? in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
Well @Hope *pulls long, solemn professor-face, folds hands gravely in lap* time spent on philosophy is never wasted. Philosophical thought is the magnifying lens through which we view our world. *nods solemnly* The clearer understanding we have of philosophy, the less confusing the world is.
😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favorites? in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
@Hope yay! You got it! I narrowed it down to pretty much that last night, but I wanted to look at it from every possible angle before I said anything. Bravo! I didn’t know you were a philosopher… 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favorites? in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
@Daeus ooh… ouch. Okay, gimme a while to figure that out. I thought I had it for a minute, but then I lost it. I’m still operating on sub-par intelligence. 😛
Unless perhaps non-existence is non-existent by very definition and therefore naturally does not exist… or co-exists with its nonexistence… hmmmm… yeah, give me a bit. 😉
And yes.…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favorites? in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
@Daeus ooh… ouch. Okay, gimme a while to figure that out. I thought I had it for a minute, but then I lost it. I’m still operating on sub-par intelligence. 😛
Unless perhaps non-existence is non-existent by very definition and therefore naturally does not exist… or co-exists with its nonexistence… hmmmm… yeah, give me a bit. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favorites? in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 11 months ago
Okay guys, I discovered a new favorite. My mom bought me this book on a random impulse, having heard it once before as an audiobook, and I devoured it in a day.
Ray Bradbury’s Fahrenheit 451.
Read it.
There’s a bit of language in it and a very few pretty graphic scenes, but they in no way detracted from the beauty of the story for me. In case…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Daughter of the King says Hello! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 11 months ago
Hey, a newcomer! I can’t believe I missed this… 😛 Anyway, welcome to KP, @C-C-Lane!
I know exactly what you mean about writing historical fiction— I have the same problem. All of my earliest novels were historical fiction, and they are quite liberally scattered with incongruous dragon metaphors. 😛
And hey, you know what, it’s actually…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Pleasure Symbolized in the forum Fantasy 9 years, 12 months ago
Hm… *thinkthinkthink* Hm… pleasure… maybe… hey, would it work if it were a plant? Like, a grapevine or something? I don’t know why grapevine— probably because it puts me in mind of wine. 😛 But it could be— oh! Wait… wait wait wait… sorry, I’m thinking out loud here. Maybe it’s some forbidden but delicious…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Question in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@WarrioroftheRealm right here. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Aliens, in the forum Sci-Fi 9 years, 12 months ago
@Timothy-Young this is an excellent topic.
I think there are so few Christian scifi stories because Christians are still waking up and coming out of an ‘anything strange is bad’ and ‘all art is sinful’ mindset. That may be a bit harsh, but I think it’s justified. Christians have had lapses and relapses of legalism over the years for a long, long…[Read more]
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