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Catwing replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
filewriter@base13x wrote:
A Kingdom Pen Adventure: Truly Lost our Minds
By
The File Writer of Base13x (@filewriterbase13x)
Part Five: King Who?
I ran with the dog, who said her name was Skredder, and the purple giraffe, Kaya, at my side. B-bot and Catwing flew above us. I was of course not sure of where we were going, but the dog seemed to…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@rochellaine, @skredder, @that_writer_girl_99,
I don’t know if anyone is still writing, but I’m here for a bit
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@jenwriter17 Hahaha! Hooray!!! 😀
I accept your challenge for a rematch. We shall meet again.
Okay, goodbye! See you later.
@skredder @that_writer_girl_99 are you still here?
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Skredder replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@rochellaine Whoops! Sorry. Yeah, a guy thinks my MC might have been trying to poison his wife. Literally all my MC was trying to do was get the wife a bowl of soup because she’s sick. My poor MC.
I’m glad yours gets a blanket.
@that_writer_girl_99 Heyo! Good to see you!
I’ve got a question for y’all. If someone is drawing, either an art piece…[Read more]
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
A Kingdom Pen Adventure: Truly Lost our Minds
By
The File Writer of Base13x (@filewriterbase13x)
Part Four: The Losing of Minds
“How? How could I have lost it? It must have been during or after the storm. The storm. Why did I remember that but not who my neighbors were?
I was walking through a forest that I didn’t remember the name of,…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Kindly critique this, will you? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 8 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99Â Thanks for the feedback…very helpful!
@ariel-ashira YESS!!! Oh, I’m so glad you liked it!
@daughteroftheking Thank you kindly. And yes, those are some good points. *strokes chin*
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
A Kingdom Pen Adventure: Truly Lost our Minds
By
The File Writer of Base13x (@filewriterbase13x)
Part three: After the Storm
I opened my eyes eyes slowly, groaning as I sat up. Confused, I realized that I was on the floor. I rubbed the soreness off of my cheek. I noticed golden sun rays shining through the little gaps of the window shutters.…[Read more]
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Christine Eaton replied to the topic Comics in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Tell me of your comics, Elizabeth 😀
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@filewriterbase13x @seekjustice @that_writer_girl_99
Hey all! I am writing! -
filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
Ok, great! @that_writer_girl_99, Oh, I really like your user name by the way. What made you decide to be a super hero? What is your WIP? Is that a lot of questions?
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99, Writing. *double blinks* 0:50 to 0:15? Or 0:oo to 0:15?
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 or @jane-maree I only ask because I know you two are on.
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Ingrid started the topic Kindly critique this, will you? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 8 months ago
Okay, guys. I got brave and decided to share the prologue from the first draft of my fantasy novel, Substitute. Since it’s obviously the opening of the book, I want to know if you guys would keep reading. And please add grammar mistakes/rewording edits. I love your advice!!! 🙂
Here goes noth…[Read more]
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99. Yay, I’m glad! Your character didn’t have much on the CSC, so I hope I portrayed you somewhat accurately. Well, I kind of share Ezi with you, so you can half have a Griffin.
@skredder. Thanks! You don’t need to worry. At least I don’t think so. 😉
@sam-kowal. Thank you. Yes, I really like Ezi too.☺
@notawriter. Thanks. Yes,…[Read more]
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 and @daeus   Sorry I guess I didn’t tag you.
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
A Kingdom Pen Adventure: Truly Lost our Minds
By
The File Writer of Base13x (@filewriterbase13x)
Part two: Of Kings and of Turtles
When I saw what had knocked me down I laughed. The beast knocked me down again, playfully. It was Ezi. My pet Griffin.
“Okay, okay. I missed you too. Now. Get. Off. Me.” I laughed. He was too heavy to still be…[Read more]
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99, I am glad you liked it. Is there anything that you want to add about your character that isn’t on the CSC? I am guessing not, but I’m just checking.
@sam-kowal and @ariel-ashira. Thank you guys! I better warn you both right now, that I am in love with writing cliffhangers. Just sayin’.
@notawriter and @alia. Thank you guys.…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Lots of Crazy Keapeefers in the forum Poetry 6 years, 8 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @notawriter Thank you! 🙂
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
A Kingdom Pen Adventure: Truly Lost our Minds
By
The File Writer of Base 13x (@filewriterbase13x)
Part 1: A Place for Inspiration
The thunder crashed through the sky, followed by a flash of light. Rain. I usually loved the rain, but not today. I had a grudge against rain today. Just as I had yesterday and the day before and the day before…[Read more]
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@filewriterbase13x Hooray!! I love KP lit!! *streamers rain down on the whole thread* I don’t feel strongly about being a character, but if you need a tiger in it, Reggie volunteers! He’s my guard tiger that protects me from the various hazards of being a writer. He’s a little odd, very involuntary and concise. (that’s how he describes himself,…[Read more]
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