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@freedomwriter76

That scene. Was. So. Good. Some Peet’s of it could have been far too graphic, but not with that beautiful twist. Ugh. That’s the type of books we need more of.

( You can completely ignore this paragraph, but I’m adding it in because I wish someone pointed it out to me when I first started writing. So, just to save you a bunch of…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Did I ever mention that I love coats? Especially overcoats and great coats.

So… I’m really enjoying Grimm’s clothing. A lot.

@godlyfantasy12

That makes total sense, although perhaps an interesting system of genetics.

Wait…what incident?

WHAT DID YOU DO TO HER?!?

Of course, I understand that you didn’t necessarily do anything, but you are the author, so…

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

I’m thinking the twins have somewhat heightened senses, as I’m trying to make them more like in the books. However, they probably don’t even notice it.

The Twins

Zlatan rubbed a hand down the back of his neck till he could feel the bindings. Still in place and relatively tight. Good.

Then he…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Of course! Do you jest? Please show us the darlings.

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Btw, if any of y’all have read LotR, Annia happens to have the same personality as Pippin, although thankfully not the same percentages.

Cécile

She smiled and gave a small nod. “If you would like. We don’t know our way around here, but do you need help looking for your friends?”

The group s…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka

By the way, I think Reúven is an early grower, so he’s near 6′. Viktor has been in the midst of a growth spurt since you last saw him, so he’s more like 5′ 7″ now.

Viktor 

The door had opened to reveal a familiar face. Two, in fact. Viktor’s eyes went wide, and he saw November’s jaw fall s…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

*Drops through window*

Did I hear my name?

Ooo, looks like I left some characters hanging.

*Ruefully pats Annia on the head*

@godlyfantasy12

Right. I’ll get to it!

*Is very glad you managed to dodge*

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka

Bam!

*The door flies open*

*I skid in with a crash and a yelp*

Hi, y’all! I’m back.

@theloonyone

Well, they’re not exactly bands. Come ti think of it, I’m not sure what they’re called. They were randomly picked from a long list. =)

• Indiana Bible College is a church/Bible College choir. They have some spectacular music. I also enjoy several other Bible Colleges, but that’s the one I thought of first.
• Sight and Sound is a…

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@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Vulkasin

Nyx looked miffed, like a kid told no.

At least everyone here seemed to have a sense of humor, even if slightly disfunctional. He grinned and seated himself cross legged and leaned against the wall, hands clasped behind his head.

Zlatan

He eased himself to the floor, grateful for…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

@godlyfantasy12

Grimm!!!! *Sob*

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon

Zlatan

“We’re stopping, and you are going to rest,” Grimm stared at him. “But if you have a problem with that, you’re free to go your own way.”

Vulkasin laughed. And kept laughing till he sank helplessly to the floor. Great. Zlatan cut his eyes at his brother, but he couldn’t…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Oh no! I never responded! (A quick warning: if I drop off in the midst of a conversation, I probably thought out a whole reply, and since it was written in my head, I thought I’d written it on here. I usually realize I didn’t, but it may take a while.)

I’ll consider it for later! I’m so burnt out after reading North! Or be…

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@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Vulkasin

At last. Someone to make Zlati slow down for a moment.

But his brother had that quirk in his brow which said he was thinking. Analyzing.

“I’m a Desanik. I’ll be fine.” He gave the edge of his cloak a jerk. “But if you vant to stop a moment…V’e do need to know v’hat happened to…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Understood! 🙂 Yeah, we can enjoy re-meeting Riker and them all as their future selves.

@godlyfantasy12

You should!

I think they are horrible people, but as such are wonderful characters. I really like the callous way they interact, the apparent lack of real brotherly love. (Although that sounds like an awful thing to like……[Read more]

@theloonyone

Welcome to the Kingdom! I’m Koshka, a writer of non-magical medieval-fantasy and other stuff. Mostly poetry.

Oooo, I have no idea what all those music people/bands are, but then I have a rather… unique taste? My favorites include but is definitely not limited to, Indiana Bible College, Sight and Sound theater, and Simon…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

*Slips in through secret hatch*

You’re fine! I figured out what happened right away, and don’t worry. I’ve done plenty of mildly embarrassing stuff on here, such as tagging myself. Twice.

*Vanishes*

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Zlatan

He carefully set aside the strangeness of what had just happened. They needed to move, to find whoever was responsible for turning Nyx into a mad creature.

But to do that, they’d need speed. Zatan sucked in a breath and leaned against the wall for a moment. Mentally, he gathered up all…[Read more]