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Koshka replied to the topic Character Playlists in the forum Music 1 year, 10 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Daithà MacLassair: about 18-19 years old, 6′ but lightly built. A red fox in the book, Daithà has Flame red hair that comes down partially over his ears but not in his light hazel eyes that miss nothing and tell less. Foxish features. He’s the nephew of a Lasairin Clansman, and has devoted his life, and death, to the cause as a spy and assassin. H…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Wilkins OLaith: about 16 years old. Is a gray fox in the book, a boy here. About 5’6″, and of a slight but strong build. Has tousled grayish-brownish-blonde hair cut a bit raggedly but shorter than DaithÃ’s. Dark eyebrows and lashes make his misty gray eyes stand out all the more. He’s a resistance fighter, yet with a gentle voice and a courteous…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Bwahaha!!!
Actually, there isn’t much to worry about when it comes to Wilkins… Daithà may be another problem, but the two both need help, er, development.
Awww, no body better hurt those poor darlings!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I hope I got what November would say right…
The Twins
Run? The very idea! Vulkasin crossed his arms, face solemn.
Zlatan stepped back slightly to think. He ran one hand down the back of his neck, winced. “Then v’at would happen to you?”
“You…you don’t understand.” Novembré frowned and tugged at his curls. “I’m……[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I last mention I could find of her was on page 231, but then I don’t know where she went or with what group.
I was also skim reading so may have missed her.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
AHHHH!!! You’re back!
I can’t wait to read more about Fin, and all those other charies!
And…
I may need to add in a character in desperate need of development. You see, I wasn’t going to worry too much about him because he wasn’t in the first book. But now that’s changed (mad author laugh) and I need to figure him out. So, I…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
So, I’m not sure if this happens for your fire elves, but a friend of mine has an elven character that has a fire talent and I’m sort of mixing her’s with what I know of November. Anyway…
The Twins
Novembré’s breath grew heavy and his eyes went wide as the implication of their words seemed to sink in. Sparks flickered in the…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Okay, I need a MaIn ChArAcTeR name in the forum Characters 1 year, 10 months ago
Ah, I see. I’m not sure though, maybe they do. I haven’t come across an explanation yet, but I did see it done, just the last letter in a name.
I may need to come back to this after some study.
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Koshka replied to the topic Holiday Novella! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Whatever you like! I would love to hear your ideas. (Or should that be read?)
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Koshka replied to the topic Okay, I need a MaIn ChArAcTeR name in the forum Characters 1 year, 10 months ago
Disclaimer: I’m definitely still a student of Russian anything, and names are one of those things that are described as ‘very difficult for RSL’. Please take whatever I say with a grain of salt.
What exactly do you mean by context? Female or male? Tense in a sentence?
Diminutive forms are like nicknames, only someone…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
XD Wow. XD
That was so cringey but hilariously cute at the same time.
Santa Claus?! XD
*Wipes tears of laughter from eyes*
I’m really not sure how to critique it. The prose is a little choppy, but the story itself is distracting me. XD
Candy cane fingerprints!? XD A magically appearing mistletoe? (That particular bit was pure…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
That was like a Hallmark movie, only even better! XD
The candy cane fingerprint was probably the funniest thing for me.
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 1 year, 10 months ago
*Tip toes in*
That’s happened to me for the past few years of church camp, and I have no idea why! Some random boy I’ve never even seen before walks up to me and asks if I have a boyfriend.
And, uh…I really don’t see why. I’m not the most friendly girl out there ( for instance, my normal resting face is very serious, almost a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
The twins
Zlatan had to force his hand away from his sword hilt, stretch out the fingers in an effort to calm himself down. That man…if he were here now…he pulled in a deep breath and clasped his hands behind his back.
“Yes. Ve need to move on, to look for zem.” He looked over at November. “Zere are many people in zis place…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Holiday Novella! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Screeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee…..
*Loud squeal, obviously*
That would be so much fun! Please do!
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Koshka replied to the topic Okay, I need a MaIn ChArAcTeR name in the forum Characters 1 year, 10 months ago
So, most male Russian names that end in an ‘a’ are diminutive forms, so I’ll put the original name and it’s diminutive down.
Alyosha (Aleksey): Russian form of Alexis, meaning helper, defender.
Afonya (Afanasiy): Russian form of Athanasius, meaning Immortal.
Borya (Boris): Russian name meaning short, wolf, or snow leopard.
Kesha…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I understand. XD I do the same thing with the base cultures for my world.
Vulkasin
He grinned, putting his knife back into it’s sheath. “Den Rozhdenia, or day of birth. That’s all I’ve ever heard it called.”
Of course, it wasn’t something that celebrated; the only birthday most even took notice of was the seventh, the day a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Holiday Novella! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Oooo!!! I would love that! Like really, please do!
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