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@godlyfantasy12

Good idea. *Sigh*

Well, the why Oswald dies is…um…to move along the plot by making Mikkel try to commit suicide.

That sounds awful.

And this is why I feel so cold hearted.

There are other reasons…although most of them are about as bad.

@koshka

Should I?

I need to work on it a little, but talking about it might help.

@elishavet-pidyon

I already know, so if you want to… 😉

@godlyfantasy12

Awwwwwwwwww.

That’s so sweet, but not in a sugary way, if you know what I mean.

And I love that there’s hope in it. Like I’ve said before, a hopeless death is worse than tragic.

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

Y’all are making me feel so cold hearted. XD

Does anyone want to know how Alwin does?

Heh, heh.

I’m not sure why I’m asking, except that like everything else in those books, his death is based off of a real testimony. (Several different missionaries, actually.)

And I love it!

Even though I HATE it.

@godlyfantasy12

Oh. No.

That’s…heartbreaking.

And so sweet!!!!

Why would you do that to Grim? Just why?

But no, that is a good character death.

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, I’m probably suffering from some trauma because now I’m numb to Leon’s death. 😉

I don’t know, it just struck me as really good, fitting. To be completely honest and transparent, I’ve been to waayy more funerals in my life than births or weddings. Maybe the way he dies just strikes me as somewhat peaceful. There’s joy in…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Aww…

Confession: I’ve only ever cried over one of my characters and that was because someone else started first.

@freedomwriter76

*Deep shaky breath*

I was pretty sure this was going to happen.

*Sniff*

It’s okay.

I’ve been considering killing Wilkins, but y’all didn’t hear that so…

Hehe…

@freedomwriter76

Who do you think it is? 🙂

And yes, @koshka you nearly made me cry. Which is funny since I’ve known about Oswald for a while, but still… *Sniffle*

@godlyfantasy12

I can be completely fair and tell you who does, but…

Anyway, FreedomWriter may know who it is. Sooo.

Yes, one of them is Alwin.

BUT IT’S NOT TILL THE FOURTH BOOK!!

@godlyfantasy12

*Stares for a moment in stunned silence*

WHAT!?! Nooooooooo……..

What about Nyx?!? What is HE going to do?

Wwwhhyyyyy!!??!

Actually, now I’m curious. Why?

@godlyfantasy12

WHAT?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO…..

What happens to Nyx?

@godlyfantasy12

See how I feel?! XD

But no, I haven’t exactly introduced them yet. Or not with a character sketch/excerpt or anything like that. Viktor should live. 😉

Honestly, I would tell, but since I haven’t REALLY introduced them, you might try that coping mechanism where you don’t get close to the character you know will die, and I want…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

YES, do tell!

But to make us even, then yes I do have at least one I’ve got figured out, and an almost death.

And none of y’all actually know either of these characters like at all, but anyway.

So, I vaguely referred to this in the RP, but Mikkel has a close, close friend named Oswald who’s the medic for his group in the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

*Staggers back from hooded figure, then rushes forward on bended knee*

“Don’t touch November-Ara-Paxton-Grim-or Luna! PLEASE!!!!”

*Settles back into seat.*

“But, please, do tell.”

@godlyfantasy12

You did? It does? Yay! Do you like it? 🙂

I’m contemplating telling y’all Fritz’s real name, but I’d also want to go back and tell you the whole story behind it, and that would take long.

And YES! Character deaths. I love them about as much as I hate them, which is a lot.

(And I want to ask who dies, but also don’t know if I…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I hope this will be helpful…

• Loosely plot your book out on note cards, with about how much time in the storyline you think that section should take.
• If things are going to fast, step back and  try writing a character point by point through a scene. Add some description or dialogue.
• If they’re going too slow, look for…

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@whalekeeper

Yep, I’m doubled. =) If you ever have any questions, I can try to answer. (Within reason, of course)

@godlyfantasy12

Would you like to go? =)