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  • @loopylin

    To: Mellissa Thompson, my secret hideout, the In Between place

    From: Angelita, 4647 Flambert Lane, Dingyville, Maryland, The United States

    Dear Mel,

    That pool sounds scary. What is an inbetween place? How do you get to one? Were there frogs at that weird indoor pool? Frogs are way less gross than boys. FROGS don’t leave their u…[Read more]

  • Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago

    @rae

    Lucille

    Lucy did not run without the Protector. She grabbed his arm and yanked him forward, pointing. “No – Th-that way!”

    The tower had an opening at the base – a scuffed metal lid. She hadn’t noticed it before and now it was far from them both. But the crows’ shadows grew around them and the Protector surely couldn’t fight them off. He…[Read more]

  • Why did you choose to write about your main character?

    This is as complicated as it sounds! Characters are multi-faceted and ever-changing, so when faced with this question, it might be hard to answer. Do you write about them because you relate to them, carry a message through them, or simply enjoy their unique existence? It’s different for…[Read more]

  • I have never felt so called out

  • Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago

    @rae

    It’s painful to read, but thanks I guess.

    It’s not painful to read. You describe things clearly, there are varied sentence lengths, and you suggest emotion at sprinkled points through the sections. You also don’t harp on descriptions, which is something I struggle with.

  • Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago

    @rae

    Aw man… If it’s any consolation to you, I enjoy reading your rps! You’re doing a great job and if you’re frustrated with something, whatever it is, usually that means you’re getting better.

    Lucille

    Lucy tumbled over the crow’s back and landed on the ground. The crow’s focus shifted and it instantly chose to stride toward her.

    There w…[Read more]

  • @savannah_grace2009

    It’s beautiful to hear how you’ve found joy, Sara. I’m thankful you’ve found peace in this.

    Jesus has really felt everything your family is going through. It’s not just that he understands it, he went through it – he cried and suffered and wished for the pain to disappear.

    And now, in heaven, Jesus knows the best remedy to…[Read more]

  • Yesterday afternoon, my mom passed away. She’s with Jesus now, and I’m very joyful about that, but I miss her a lot, too.

    Something really cool happened though! Saturday night, my cousins on my dad’s side came to visit my mom, and when we went home, one of them spent the night in my room just for fun, and so did my sister.

    I’d been going through…[Read more]

  • Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago

    @rae

    I apologize for any mistakes, and also for taking so long.

    I’m tired.

    No problem at all. You mustn’t apologize, dear Miss Cranberry Sauce! I do not expect you to reply right away.

  • Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago

    @rae

    Lucille

    Lucy lay curled up. She pressed her face into the jacket and the fabric on her skin eased her tight breaths. Time faded; maybe an hour passed, but it didn’t matter. Enough time passed for her senses to fade, replaced by the feeling of her mother next to her on the couch. An arm wrapped around her shoulders so she could hide in the m…[Read more]

  • @loopylin

    Angelita will reply tomorrow. I just spent 45 minutes trying to figure out her favorite animal and now I need to go to bed. XD

  • Enid posted an update 9 months ago

    @cj Hello! I don’t think I’ve seen you around before! Have you been here long? :]

    • Cj replied 9 months ago

      @whalekeeper hello!! I have been on here for a while, but never active, lol. I just started writing a short story and rediscovered KP, so though I should dive a little deeper. Thanks for saying hi, though! Have you been on here long??

      • Enid replied 9 months ago

        Well it’s great to see other people come on and look around! I promise we don’t bite if you ever choose to talk in the Chat Chat. Or do whatever you like!
        I think I’ve been here for four years…? Maybe more, maybe less.

      • Enid replied 9 months ago

        Ah, you’ve spoken to my dear colleague Loops 😛 If she’s been here for three years, I’ve been here around the same amount of time.

        • Cj replied 9 months ago

          Lol, yes! You both were very kind to say hello 🙂
          And thanks! I was reading through the Chat Chat, and it’s so fun!! I might just have to pop in sometime and say hi.

  • Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago

    *Begins brainstorming a way out of the challenge I created*

  • Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago

    @loopylin

    <3 I feel like that line is semi relatable. I know I’d talk to myself about myself if I knew I was dying.

    Seems like Lucy might need some help

    Either that or she figures out a way down

    @rae

    I’m probably the cause of your brain’s suffering. I wrote a lot. XD Gabriel will be of most help if he defends her after she gets down. I’m sure…[Read more]

  • Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago

    @rae

    All good, I’ve done worse to him…

    Such is the life of a charrie

    Lucille

    Most children wonder at some point in their life – what is it like to be eaten? How much does it hurt? Does it take very long?

    Lucy hung from the crow, feet dangling, and spoke quietly to herself. “S’pose the Lord knew it was… yeah, it was good to be me. I liked bei…[Read more]

  • Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 9 months ago

    @grcr @loopylin @mineralizedwritings

    Loving all of this!! Everyone has gotten better and more confident with their art in the past… three years? I don’t actually remember how long it’s been lol, but it’s really cool to see.

  • @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon and maybe @theducktator

    Marcel

    “And Marcel! You’re team captain two.”

    Marcel stood in a corner, only half focused as he practiced spinning pencils in both hands. He looked up, suddenly aware of everyone looking at him. Some of the guys around him laughed and pushed him forward by the shoulders.

    “How does that so…[Read more]

  • Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago

    @savannah_grace2009

    Yessss, the cringe 😭 It’s such a genuine mixture of appreciation for your past self but also disgust. I can’t believe I wrote some of the things on here.

    like I would check KP at least 10 times every day 😭😂

    Same. Normally I don’t much. But I’m on break now and I decided to spend my time writing, so guess what? 😂 I’m back to c…[Read more]

  • Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago

    @rae

    Gabriel has ornithophobia now. I’m making this so hard for him

    Lucille

    The crow dodged sharply to the side and Lucy yelped. A rock flew through the air and missed the crow’s head by inches. The Protector was already running after them and aiming another rock. The crows cackled in response.

    Lucy desperately kicked her legs. She could unb…[Read more]

  • Thank you everyone 💜💜💜

     

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