@stephie
Active 3 months, 3 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
@hybridlore @theducktator @shadow
Thank you ladies sooo much for the feedback!! It makes me even more excited to dive into the third draft! <33
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whaley replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
I’ve been here for too long. Finishing at :50. Good night, everyone. XD
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whaley replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
Me: “What do you think of this?” *Shows him a specific plot point*
S: “Eh…”
Me: “What’s wrong?”
S: “You don’t know enough about electromagnetic transmitters. But your magic system is extremely complex and depends on much more than this. How do you know you aren’t making ridiculous mistakes? You’ll make me look stupid. I’m only as smart as…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
Plotting at :45! Join if you like.
Usually no one is on, unfortunately. So today is Bring-your-character-to-work Day. *Plops Seb on the floor* *Pats his head*
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whaley replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 9 months ago
I think it’s a viable idea to make another website. I still think it would not be ideal, since we have so much history here and I’m assuming it would be difficult to move everything. But I’m not putting down the idea. Some of my irl friends had a roleplay that turned into a huge campaign, and they made a website for it.
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whaley replied to the topic I'm not an International Lawyer: Help in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
@linus-smallprint Calling on our local Canadian
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Character questions in the forum Characters 9 months ago
They are all in a 50s ish red Cadillac with fins, so they’re pretty crammed. Ryla brings lots of cookies, and spends most of the trip looking out the window. Her grandfather drives. Celarent is in love with the car and keeps begging to drive it, but Ryla’s grandfather won’t let him. Iolyn is reading a thick book in the back. Letty is climbing on…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
I have a very vivid imagination, to the point that I don’t ever want my books made into a movie, because the characters wouldn’t look like I imagined them. I have this problem with other books made into movies too. Characters are more vivid in my mind than real people.
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whaley replied to the topic Character questions in the forum Characters 9 months ago
I have a question for everyone. What is it like to go on a road trip with your character? What are they like while traveling, and where do they go?
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
My characters tend to be blurry, yeah. Some more than others. If I’ve drawn the character before, then I’ll picture an version of the drawing, just in motion. A lot of the time I just picture the motion itself, abstract, or a roughly scratched drawing. Just realized I see 70% of my charries as animated, not real life. XD
Also because…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
Do you have any additional feedback after having read the whole thing?
What Sara said about adding in the other siblings a bit more. Most of them I couldn’t name or differentiate. Granted, I can barely keep track of my own siblings. XD
I loved Easton and Autumn! They’re so sweet and loving, and I can totally imagine them as grandparents…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
And @hybridlore
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr
Thoughts on Easton and Autumn as a couple and how their personalities go together? I’m doing some character work rn and I’m wondering if those two actually are a good match… like if they would make a good married couple in the future….
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Character questions in the forum Characters 9 months ago
I need to think about the fear responses.
How long would your character survive the zombie apocalypse?
I’m tempted to say they’d all be fine since they don’t seem to have much in the way of brains…XD
Ryla would try to feed them baked goods instead of brains and would die.
Ardon would probably die trying to protect Ryla, but if he…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Think Twice About Character Death! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
Maybe if I watched the Spiderman movie again, I’d have a different opinion. It’s been a while. That’s what I remember.
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whaley replied to the topic Think Twice About Character Death! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
I did not notice you asked questions, my apologies!
So how could a death help the plot?
I feel like it really depends on the plot itself. I know that’s a vague answer and isn’t helpful. XD But there are so many different character arcs and plots out there, so I can’t come up with rules for every one of them. Just think of a…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Think Twice About Character Death! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
That’s a very pretty scene, as well as being sad. I love it.
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium
Thank you! I have a couple more drawings almost finished and I’ll share them when I’m done. I sort of want to make a picture book now.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
@everyone would people be ok with making classes end early today to give the students time to get ready and to make the dance come quicker? I’m thinking one more class period, lunch, and then one last class.
Sounds perfect to me
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whaley replied to the topic Character questions in the forum Characters 9 months ago
In fact I like Enid’s instinctual response so much that it might just end up in her story anyway
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